The fabulous Lem0nPEEL has worked her magic!

Nothing was added in or deleted, so you didn't miss out on any content. But some rewording of sentences for better flow and some diction changes. Read it again if you'd like and tell me what you think was the biggest change!

Going out to a beer pong bar with friends shortly (to think I used to play this for free in sketchy frat houses in college...) and will come back and post today's chapter after! :D

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