DylinThePizza
Translator2 years ago
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Hi, I'm one of the translators of this novel, Dylinthepizza.
I'm going to be using the same review I posted in NovelUpdates here. Take it with a grain of salt because I'll probably be a bit biased.
The characters in the novel have dark and somewhat depressing backgrounds, but there seems to be light at the end of the tunnel, so it's not exactly all doom and gloom. The novel seems to be heading in the direction of a harem. At the very least, there isn't much romantic development because the MC has motives that prevent developments from occurring. But as I mentioned before, the novel is quite dark, so it’s hard to say how the romance will turn out.
The MC is kind but not stupid. I suppose you could say that he isn't good at logical thinking, but he has good intuition. The setting for the novel and the power system is based on real-life religions, and it's relatively straightforward. It's somewhat different from other novels but nothing absolutely groundbreaking like certain novels. The writing seems to be fairly good. The plot has a clear direction, and the MC has a clear goal, so it's probably going to have a proper ending.
Moving on to the flaws, firstly, the start of the novel has quite a lot of cliche developments. The MC has quite a lot of plot armor, and there is some ‘high school drama.’ That said, there is less of that as the novel continues, and there are also some plot twists that I didn’t expect. Some of the villains and side characters lack character/development. Some parts sort of drag out for a while, and plot progression is slow, as usual with web novels. But arguably, some of these non-important chapters are quite funny, so it's not entirely a bad thing. Also, imo slow is still better than rushed.
I found the novel quite enjoyable to translate. I think the original had fairly good writing. If the writing looks like garbage, it's probably my fault.
Alright, that's all I'm going to say because I have to get back to translating... When I finish translating the novel, maybe I'll update this review.
Also, to anyone who reads the novel, thank you.
I'm going to be using the same review I posted in NovelUpdates here. Take it with a grain of salt because I'll probably be a bit biased.
The characters in the novel have dark and somewhat depressing backgrounds, but there seems to be light at the end of the tunnel, so it's not exactly all doom and gloom. The novel seems to be heading in the direction of a harem. At the very least, there isn't much romantic development because the MC has motives that prevent developments from occurring. But as I mentioned before, the novel is quite dark, so it’s hard to say how the romance will turn out.
The MC is kind but not stupid. I suppose you could say that he isn't good at logical thinking, but he has good intuition. The setting for the novel and the power system is based on real-life religions, and it's relatively straightforward. It's somewhat different from other novels but nothing absolutely groundbreaking like certain novels. The writing seems to be fairly good. The plot has a clear direction, and the MC has a clear goal, so it's probably going to have a proper ending.
Moving on to the flaws, firstly, the start of the novel has quite a lot of cliche developments. The MC has quite a lot of plot armor, and there is some ‘high school drama.’ That said, there is less of that as the novel continues, and there are also some plot twists that I didn’t expect. Some of the villains and side characters lack character/development. Some parts sort of drag out for a while, and plot progression is slow, as usual with web novels. But arguably, some of these non-important chapters are quite funny, so it's not entirely a bad thing. Also, imo slow is still better than rushed.
I found the novel quite enjoyable to translate. I think the original had fairly good writing. If the writing looks like garbage, it's probably my fault.
Alright, that's all I'm going to say because I have to get back to translating... When I finish translating the novel, maybe I'll update this review.
Also, to anyone who reads the novel, thank you.