JustNa
VIP
6 months ago
Recommended
I’m writing this review because I feel like people are overly critical of this story despite their agreement that the world and setting is interesting.
Objectively there are a few plot holes with regard to how joining an organization arc works out. It’s a bit weird and I agree that it is a bit of huge coincidence for the number of people in that plot but at least the arc explores the world more and give reasoning for things that happened. It’s not like it’s a bad arc, some people just hate passive mc.
Quite honestly in my view, the mc is not really passive. He just accept things that are out of his control. Why be angry? He isn’t 14. The world is insanely unsafe and untrustworthy that he understood for the kind of test.
The most characters are probably the least good part of this story but each of them has their uniqueness that I enjoy. The world building is really good that I understand why other review don’t give it a time for explanation to be taken place. The bits and pieces start to get releases that left you wanting to learn more. There are creativity and decent writing here that you could be happy with.
Is it a masterpiece? No. Is it decent? Yes. If you are looking for something interesting and not copy pasted Chinese hero story or dungeon diving then this is something that works quite well.
Objectively there are a few plot holes with regard to how joining an organization arc works out. It’s a bit weird and I agree that it is a bit of huge coincidence for the number of people in that plot but at least the arc explores the world more and give reasoning for things that happened. It’s not like it’s a bad arc, some people just hate passive mc.
Quite honestly in my view, the mc is not really passive. He just accept things that are out of his control. Why be angry? He isn’t 14. The world is insanely unsafe and untrustworthy that he understood for the kind of test.
The most characters are probably the least good part of this story but each of them has their uniqueness that I enjoy. The world building is really good that I understand why other review don’t give it a time for explanation to be taken place. The bits and pieces start to get releases that left you wanting to learn more. There are creativity and decent writing here that you could be happy with.
Is it a masterpiece? No. Is it decent? Yes. If you are looking for something interesting and not copy pasted Chinese hero story or dungeon diving then this is something that works quite well.