Story moves way too fast, world building is none existant, you don't feel at all for anything for protagonist, so much suspension of belief and bad science (yes I get it that its a science Fiction book, but it must root in Science somewhere, not suddenly appears OPed), just not any where close to Asimov, Heinlein and co standard or any era Sc-Fi.
Read up to Chapter 11, hope it actually improves, I give it up to chapter 30 if it dont improved my then am not going to bother and waste my time trying to read bad Sc-Fi that dont engage.
Story moves way too fast, world building is none existant, you don't feel at all for anything for protagonist, so much suspension of belief and bad science (yes I get it that its a science Fiction book, but it must root in Science somewhere, not suddenly appears OPed), just not any where close to Asimov, Heinlein and co standard or any era Sc-Fi.
Read up to Chapter 11, hope it actually improves, I give it up to chapter 30 if it dont improved my then am not going to bother and waste my time trying to read bad Sc-Fi that dont engage.