After reading just 10 chapter i can say with confidence that i don't like the novel. The reason being the absolute lack of logic combined with awful pacing. Mc is a person with an wiped personality in an cyberpunk like world. My main problem comes from the fact that despite being having no personlity the mc is badly written. I imagine a person with no personlity be like someone with alzheimer, maybe panicked, maybe confused, maybe emontionless. The author however tries to make him capable while having basically no personality. It can be done but here he really doesn't feel right. Second point is that the people who took him in have actual expectations about him. I won't lie they did try to (or did) help him, but this also bring me to the trind point: the pacing. In the span of 8 chapters he awakend got kidnapped, rescued, made an contract about his future, learned about his (possible) relative, enrolled in an academy got bullied, spend a few months there and did his job. Is it a lot? Because it goddamm is. This pacing is insane. Usually we schould familiarise our self with the mc first, however here in this novel i actually have doubts WHO is the mc. Also the world building is nonexistient for now.
Currently i rate it 3/10 as for chapter 8
In other words: ChatGPD makes a novel with no strong point, sorry no points at all, just a circle.
Is it redememable? Yes, the pacing needs just to change, because, really i'm starting to belive i'm reading a movie script. Maybe an comic without the pictures? Not sure anymore. Keypoint to redemption: slow de fuk down. Please sit down for a second and describe in detail the world, mc or what is going on. Currently with it's bad quality it shouldn't be on wuxiaworld.
I will try to keep reading maybe it gets better.
After reading just 10 chapter i can say with confidence that i don't like the novel. The reason being the absolute lack of logic combined with awful pacing. Mc is a person with an wiped personality in an cyberpunk like world. My main problem comes from the fact that despite being having no personlity the mc is badly written. I imagine a person with no personlity be like someone with alzheimer, maybe panicked, maybe confused, maybe emontionless. The author however tries to make him capable while having basically no personality. It can be done but here he really doesn't feel right. Second point is that the people who took him in have actual expectations about him. I won't lie they did try to (or did) help him, but this also bring me to the trind point: the pacing. In the span of 8 chapters he awakend got kidnapped, rescued, made an contract about his future, learned about his (possible) relative, enrolled in an academy got bullied, spend a few months there and did his job. Is it a lot? Because it goddamm is. This pacing is insane. Usually we schould familiarise our self with the mc first, however here in this novel i actually have doubts WHO is the mc. Also the world building is nonexistient for now.
Currently i rate it 3/10 as for chapter 8
In other words: ChatGPD makes a novel with no strong point, sorry no points at all, just a circle.
Is it redememable? Yes, the pacing needs just to change, because, really i'm starting to belive i'm reading a movie script. Maybe an comic without the pictures? Not sure anymore. Keypoint to redemption: slow de fuk down. Please sit down for a second and describe in detail the world, mc or what is going on. Currently with it's bad quality it shouldn't be on wuxiaworld.
I will try to keep reading maybe it gets better.
