Daoist Newmoon
4 years ago
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EditedRecommended
A nice change of pace from all the other cultivation novels on the site. It has been a good read so far with lots of interesting and funny situations, although it isn't perfect.
Biggest complaint I have with the story so far is Cheng Xi's lack of professionalism as a psychiatrist, but then again, if she really was portrayed realistically as a psychiatrist then some of the fun situations probably wouldn't have happened. So, my constructive criticism towards the author would be: "You have good material, just put in a bit more ingenuity to balance this aspect out."
***Update after finishing the novel
If anyone is worried about my previous critique, it stands out more in the early stages of the story and towards the end it no longer felt like a problem.
You will most likely have mixed feelings towards many of the characters at certain points in the story, but even with that, the story accumulates and wraps up well with character growth for a lot of them. Overall a good read.
Biggest complaint I have with the story so far is Cheng Xi's lack of professionalism as a psychiatrist, but then again, if she really was portrayed realistically as a psychiatrist then some of the fun situations probably wouldn't have happened. So, my constructive criticism towards the author would be: "You have good material, just put in a bit more ingenuity to balance this aspect out."
***Update after finishing the novel
If anyone is worried about my previous critique, it stands out more in the early stages of the story and towards the end it no longer felt like a problem.
You will most likely have mixed feelings towards many of the characters at certain points in the story, but even with that, the story accumulates and wraps up well with character growth for a lot of them. Overall a good read.