c0debreaker6
3 months ago
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EditedRecommended
Only about chapter 21 right now but I'm really digging this. There's some gaps but the world building is really good, especially the pace of the story. It's not slow paced, but not that hurried either, just the right amount to conclude a part or event and not make you bore like some mediocre Korean novels.
This actually reminds me of reading Legendary Moonlight Sculptor again. The VR elements and the MC having a somewhat similar attitude and behavior to Weed is really driving it home that this is heavily inspired by LMS.
Give this a try guys, it's worth your time at least.
Edit 1:
Man, I don't get the sudden negative reviews for this novel. It's been 70 chapters so far, and the development of the story is just being better. Yes, there may be some plot armor stuff going on, but who hasn't? Any fantasy or shounen stories have some sort of plot armors in the beginning. Even Overgeared and LMS has this problem, especially the generic stories that came after those series. While this story also fell in the same trope, the way the author crafted the plot does not feel forced, but rather an accumulation of the consequences the MC did from the very beginning. The reason he stumbles many Fate quests wasn't because he was the MC and he was given it for the sake of it, but rather because he's kind, and doesn't turn a blind eye to injustice. The recent Fate quest started because he took pity in a little girl selling flowers. His actions may seem insignificant, but it has far reaches than he could ever imagine. That's a good story telling.
This actually reminds me of reading Legendary Moonlight Sculptor again. The VR elements and the MC having a somewhat similar attitude and behavior to Weed is really driving it home that this is heavily inspired by LMS.
Give this a try guys, it's worth your time at least.
Edit 1:
Man, I don't get the sudden negative reviews for this novel. It's been 70 chapters so far, and the development of the story is just being better. Yes, there may be some plot armor stuff going on, but who hasn't? Any fantasy or shounen stories have some sort of plot armors in the beginning. Even Overgeared and LMS has this problem, especially the generic stories that came after those series. While this story also fell in the same trope, the way the author crafted the plot does not feel forced, but rather an accumulation of the consequences the MC did from the very beginning. The reason he stumbles many Fate quests wasn't because he was the MC and he was given it for the sake of it, but rather because he's kind, and doesn't turn a blind eye to injustice. The recent Fate quest started because he took pity in a little girl selling flowers. His actions may seem insignificant, but it has far reaches than he could ever imagine. That's a good story telling.

