Duotian
VIP
14 days ago
Not recommended
The story started off interestingly and had me hooked. I was seriously starting to enjoy the MC's personality, too, and liking the flow of the story.
However, what makes a novel great isn't just the overall plot, but also a huge part of it is the style of writing.
Having read through 32 chapters of it, I've seen a lot of inconsistencies with the point of view of the narrator, clumsy dialogue, inconsistent personalities of the villains, and just out right nonsensical plot progression in a way that the story build up feels more like it skips and jumps here and there, and not in a flashback-y sort of way, but with the sequence of the scenes. The fight scenes also appear underwhelming when I compare them to other good novels like Beyond the Timescape on this website.
Unfortunately will have to drop this novel as I personally can't stand the style of writing and the inconsistencies in it despite enjoying the plot and the MC of the story.
However, what makes a novel great isn't just the overall plot, but also a huge part of it is the style of writing.
Having read through 32 chapters of it, I've seen a lot of inconsistencies with the point of view of the narrator, clumsy dialogue, inconsistent personalities of the villains, and just out right nonsensical plot progression in a way that the story build up feels more like it skips and jumps here and there, and not in a flashback-y sort of way, but with the sequence of the scenes. The fight scenes also appear underwhelming when I compare them to other good novels like Beyond the Timescape on this website.
Unfortunately will have to drop this novel as I personally can't stand the style of writing and the inconsistencies in it despite enjoying the plot and the MC of the story.