TDG Chapter 15

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Chapter 15 – Guidance

Just when Nie Li and his group were chatting, Nie Li’s gaze suddenly turned towards a distant direction. Amongst the rows of book shelves, a graceful figure was currently holding a thick book looking down at it. A head of purple hair was like a waterfall falling. Beside the ears, bundles of hair were tied up with silk thread adding more lovely temperament to her.

The evening sunlight shined on her delicate face, making her more elegant and attractive.

Nie Li’s heartbeat fasten by just looking at her. For an instant, countless memories flooded his head. At the Endless Desert, hiding and running from the chase of countless demon beast, in those death and life situations, with Nie Li’s sharp sense of danger, he saved the survivors countless times and gradually got together with Ye Ziyun as they grew to know each other better.

Although Nie Li’s cultivation was extremely poor and the gap between him and Ye Ziyun was as wide as the sky, both of them still got together.

That night, Nie Li touched Ye Ziyun’s smooth back, the crazy love for her in his heart couldn’t be suppressed much longer. Ye Ziyun under the moonlight, were as a perfect image of a goddess statue, her attractive face, her curvy body, smooth and dedicate jade arms, perky twin perks… Those crazy scenes were deeply imprinted in Nie Li’s heart.

Nie Li of that time, never in his imagination that a goddess-like beautiful like Ye Ziyun actually fell for him.

Later, in order to cover himself and other survivors to escape, Ye Ziyun died in the battle. Seeing that scene, Nie Li’s heart were as though it was stabbed by someone. He still remembers that kind of piercing pain. If it wasn’t to fulfill Ye Ziyun’s wishes to protect her family to safety, Nie Li of that time would definitely follow her together.

‘If it wasn’t that mysterious Temporal Demon Spirit Book, I wouldn’t be able to come back to life, wouldn’t be able to see her again!’

Nie Li inhaled a deep breath, calming himself down from his inner excitement. He had always been searching for a chance to get close to Ye Ziyun, but he didn’t want to disturb her. Anyways since the marriage between her and Shen Yue had not been set yet, the current Nie Li felt an urgent need to enhance his strength.

Only by having strength, he could deter Sacred family, and then be able to snatch Ye Ziyun from the hands of Shen Yue.

“You guys go up first, I still have some matters to attend!” Nie Li looked towards Du Ze, Pu Liao and the trio saying.

Du Ze and Lu Piao followed Nie Li’s gaze. Hands holding onto an ancient book, the beauty quietly reading was like an elf in the evening, simply perfect. Wearing a white silk dress, having a graceful demeanour, leaning against the bookshelf. With a dignified posture, quiet and elegant like a lotus out of the water, holy and noble causing one not dare to profane. They instantly knew what Nie Li wanted to do.

Everyone likes beautiful things. It was just that when facing Ye Ziyun, they didn’t even have the courage to go forward due to their low self-esteem .

Nie Li walked towards Ye Ziyun’s direction.

“I bet Nie Li will fail in 15 minutes, the prettiest girl in class would definitely ignore him!” Lu Piao said confidently smiling.

“I hope Nie Li wouldn’t get a blow too big for him.” Du Ze murmured.

They hid in a corner looking at Nie Li. “He’ll probably get ignored by her. The prettiest girl in class isn’t that easy to go near to, even Shen Yue also failed to get close to her numerous times.”

Ye Ziyun quietly reading books at dusk, this beautiful scene Nie Li couldn’t bear to break it.

Nie Li, unexpectedly, found that the book Ye Ziyun is reading is actually that Book of Divine Lightning Fire.

Ye Ziyun furrowed her brows while flipping through the book. She is someone that has a strong competitive spirit and is also very hard working, no matter if it’s the talent, cultivation, or even her knowledge, they are also far stronger that ordinary people. She still had that little pride in her heart, but she actually realised the gap between her and Nie Li was actually so huge.

The stuff in the Book of Divine Lightning Fire is too profound!

The first volume was translated, which was okay, but, after the first volume, the other volumes were written with the language of Snow Wind Empire. She didn’t understand any of it!

On knowledge, Ye Ziyun is indeed stronger than her peers, but she found the wrong guy to compare herself to. After all Nie Li had been reborn.

Seeing Ye Ziyun holding and flipping through the Book of Divine Lightning Fire, with Nie Li’s understanding towards Ye Ziyun, he naturally guessed Ye Ziyun’s mind. He couldn’t help but smile as he walked to the side of Ye Ziyun, and teasingly said “So, student Ye Ziyun is also interested in Book of Divine Lightning Fire?”

Ye Ziyun then recovered from her deep thoughts. Looking at Nie Li, her face revealed a surprised expression, she obviously did not expect to bump into Nie Li here. Think again, Nie Li is probably here reading books, otherwise how could he have that much knowledge?

“This book is too profound, I just took a skimmed through them and realised that I couldn’t read a lot of things inside!” Ye Ziyun closed the Book of Divine Lightning Fire, elegantly saying while politely keeping her distance with Nie Li.

Ye Ziyun’s slender figure, although she was a few steps away, subtle fragrance could be smelt from her. Nie Li knew that this is her unique body fragrance, causing one to be mesmerized. This fragrance, so familiar and intimate, is the fragrance in his memories.

“This Book of Divine Lightning Fire is written with the words from the Snow Wind Empire era. The words from that era are slightly esoteric and hard to understand, but if you can first learn the words from the Black Gold Empire era, you will find them easier to understand and can read the words from the Snow Wind Empire era much more easily.” Nie Li smiled saying.

“Words from Black Gold Empire era?” Ye Ziyun carefully recalled, before the Age of Darkness, there were 3 eras that were rather well recorded the most powerful empires for each era are, respectively, the Saint Spirit Empire era, the Snow Wind Empire era, and the Sacred Empire era. Black Gold Empire is a relatively big empire in the era of Snow Wind Empire.

Nie Li is well-learnt and knows a lot of stuff, Ye Ziyun couldn’t help to feel a little admiration.

“But to learn an era’s language to read this book is not necessary. Also with your aptitude, is not too suitable to practice Lightning Fire cultivation techniques.” Nie Li’s expressions were calm, unlike other boys who’re so reserved and stiff in front of Ye Ziyun.

After all, Nie Li understands Ye Ziyun too well, down to the depth of bones.

“Oh? Then what cultivation technique is suitable for me?” Ye Ziyun sizing the boy in front of her, Nie Li’s knowledge caused her to feel a little dejected and depressed.

“If I guessed correctly, with your family, someone in the family used soul force to examine your body before, you’re currently practicing Snow Wind cultivation technique, so Snow Wind cultivation technique is probably the best suited for your physique!” Nie Li faintly smiled saying.

Ye Ziyun’s eyes widened, shocked as she look at Nie Li, Nie Li actually guessed correctly, her grandfather indeed used his soul force to examine her body before, but that was a secret not known to others, after all by examining once used up large amount of soul force, how did Nie Li know of this?

Seeing Ye Ziyun’s expression, Nie Li knew that he guessed correctly, smiled saying “Although your family examined your physique before, but he definitely couldn’t detect your soul realm’s form, so the cultivation technique he chose might not be suitable for you.”

“The form of the soul realm?” Ye Ziyun frowned her brows, she didn’t know what that is.

“How about taking a little bit of time and let me examine your soul force’s form?” Nie Li asked towards Ye Ziyun.

Ye Ziyun raised her head looking at Nie Li, thought for a moment and shook her head, “No need!” She still kept her distance from Nie Li. If Nie Li’s method of examining is similar to her grandfather, then there will be bound to have some skin contact. Ye Ziyun still have some precautions against Nie Li.

Seems to guessed what Ye Ziyun is thinking, Nie Li smiled. He knew that Ye Ziyun thought too much, saying, “Actually the method of examining is very simple, get an unused soul crystal when you get back, then by injecting your soul force into the soul crystal, I just need to observe the soul crystal awhile to tell your soul realm’s form.”

“Oh? That simple?” Ye Ziyun apologetically looked at Nie Li, seems like she misunderstood Nie Li, a single soul crystal wouldn’t need that much money.

“If you want to test the form of your soul realm, look for me here tomorrow around this time.” Nie Li finished his words, turned around and left.

Ye Ziyun astounded looking at Nie Li. Usually when boys talked to her, they would want to chat for a little longer, but Nie Li is actually an exception. What kind of person is Nie Li actually? She realised she doesn’t understand this classmate at all.

Nie Li’s gasped Ye Ziyun’s character. The more he tries to get closer to Ye Ziyun, the further Ye Ziyun will distance herself against him. The time in the future is still long, first leave a good impression in Ye Ziyun then slowly build up their relationship.

Ye Ziyun clenched her teeth, sounded “Classmate Nie Li.”

“What’s the matter?” Nie Li turned his head asking.

Seeing that Nie Li and Ye Ziyun were talking in the distance and when Nie Li walked away, Ye Ziyun actually called out to him, caused Du Ze, Lu Piao and the group to look at each other dumbfounded.

“Sure enough, he deserves to be the boss. First, he made Ning’er Goddess to take the initiative to send breakfast, and now actually made Ye Goddess call out to him For the happiness of the rest of my life, I need to ask boss for some guidance.” Wei Nan murmured.

This caused jealousy from bystanders, to be able to speak with Ye Goddess, how many men wished for that kind of thing?

Du Ze and Li Piao looked at each other.

“Seems like we underestimated Nie Li!”

“This guy is secretive of his skills!”

“Nie Li hooked up with Ning’er goddess, and he definitely can also hook up with Ye Goddess. holding one on the left and on the right hugging the other, his happiness is boundless!”

Nie Li doesn’t know of the discussions between these brothers, hearing Ye Ziyun calling for him was unexpected, he surprised turning his head back.

“Classmate Nie Li’s knowledge on inscription patterns is profound. I have some questions for Nie Li, is it okay?” Ye Ziyun asked with her bright eyes looking at Nie Li.

“Of course you can, pray tell.” Nie Li laughed

Ye Ziyun did not get her hopes too high, after all the questions that she wanted to ask weren’t things that ordinary people can solve. In the terms of understand inscription patterns, the knowledge of Ye Ziyun, who was born into one of the major families, learned was far surpassed her peers.


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16 thoughts on “TDG Chapter 15” - NO SPOILERS and NO CURSING

  1. Oh dear, Ye Ziyun has some pride. It would work too but for that darn reincarnation. He’s not even trying to burn you girl, don’t get needlessly hurt!!

  2. While i really like this novel so far, i gotta say i’m really tired of all these grammar and spelling mistakes….. I mean like just look at this…

    “Nie Li of that time, never in his imagination that a goddess-like beautiful like Ye Ziyun actually fell for him.”
    (It should be: “Nie Li, of that time, had never imagined that a goddess-like beauty such as Ye Ziyun would fall for him”)

    What is that??? I really really wish i could do some editing on these chapters, i could probably clean almost all, if not all, of the mistakes.

    1. I apologize for being nit-picky in advance, and I do realize some “errors” aren’t errors at all but a translator’s style of writing. The ones I’m pointing out are subjugated to my bias opinion. Please don’t stone me for missing a few or making a mistake.

      (God these are getting longer and longer, I’ll try to slim it down if I can by skipping some.)

      1. Better word, “quickened”:
      “Nie Li’s heartbeat [fasten] by just looking at her.”

      2. Switch for semicolon (;):
      “… touched Ye Ziyun’s smooth back[,] the crazy love for her in his heart…”

      3. Needs an extra comma (,) between “Ziyun” and “under”, also singular “was”:
      “Ye Ziyun[] under the moonlight, [were] as a perfect image of a goddess…”

      4. Consider rephrasing:
      “Nie Li of that time, never in his imagination that a goddess-like beautiful like Ye Ziyun actually fell for him.”

      4a. Example:
      The Nie Li of that time never, in his wildest imaginations, would have thought that a beautiful goddess like Ye Ziyun would actually fall for him.

      5. “Himself” is incorrect, a simple “him” will do:
      “Later, in order to cover [himself] and other survivors…”

      6. Singular, “was”; also consider changing to “felt”:
      “Seeing that scene, Nie Li’s heart [were] as though it was stabbed by someone.”

      7. Sorry, I can ignore others, but not this one, “demeanor”:
      “Wearing a white silk dress, having a graceful demeanour, leaning against the bookshelf.”

      7a. I was going to consider revising this and the following sentences… But f*** it.

      8. Omit space:
      “have the courage to go forward due to their low self-esteem [ ].”

      9. “Realized”:
      “… she actually [realised] the gap between her and Nie Li was actually so huge.”

      10. Period (.) or semicolon (;):
      “Looking at Nie Li, her face revealed a surprised expression[,] she obviously…”

      11. “Realized”:
      “… through them and realised that I couldn’t read a lot of things inside!”

      12. Ignoring “well-learnt”; period (.) or semicolon (;):
      “Nie Li is well-learnt and knows a lot of stuff[,] Ye Ziyun couldn’t help to feel a little admiration.”

      13. If you’re using “your family”, stay true and use “they” instead of “he”:
      “Although your family examined your physique before, but [he] definitely…”

      14. Slightly tricky, a better fix would be “seeming to have”:
      “[Seems to] guessed what Ye Ziyun is thinking, Nie Li smiled.”

      14a. Here:
      Seeming to have guessed what Ye Ziyun was thinking (about), Nie Le smiled.

      15. “Realized”:
      “She [realised] she doesn’t understand this classmate at all.”

      16. A period (.) is required:
      “… now actually made Ye Goddess call out to [him For] the happiness…”

      17. Capitalize first letter:
      “[h]olding one on the left and on the right hugging the other, his happiness is boundless!”

      18. Switch with semicolon (;):
      “… calling for him was unexpected[,] he surprised turning his head back.”

      18a. Slightly rephrased:
      … calling for him was unexpected. Surprised, he turned his head back around.

  3. Chapter 15 – Guidance

    Just when Nie Li and his group were chatting, Nie Li’s gaze suddenly turned towards a distant direction. Amongst the rows of book shelves, a graceful figure was currently holding a thick book looking down at it. A head of purple hair was like a waterfall falling. Beside the ears, bundles of hair were tied up with silk thread adding more lovely temperament to her.

    The evening sunlight shined on her delicate face, making her more elegant and attractive.

    Nie Li’s heartbeat quicked just from looking at her. For an instant, countless memories flooded his head. At the Endless Desert, hiding and running from the chase of countless demon beast, in those life and death situations, with Nie Li’s sharp sense of danger, he saved the survivors countless times and gradually got together with Ye Ziyun as they grew to know each other better.

    Although Nie Li’s cultivation was extremely poor and the gap between him and Ye Ziyun was as wide as the sky, both of them still got together.

    That night, Nie Li touched Ye Ziyun’s smooth back, the crazy love for her in his heart couldn’t be suppressed much longer. Ye Ziyun, under the moonlight, was the perfect image of a goddess statue, her attractive face, her curvy body, smooth and dedicate jade arms, perky twin perks… Those crazy scenes were deeply imprinted in Nie Li’s heart.

    The Nie Li of that time, never in even imagained that a goddess-like beauty like Ye Ziyun could actually fall for him.

    Later, in order to cover for him and other survivors to escape, Ye Ziyun died in battle. Seeing that scene, Nie Li’s heart was as though it was stabbed by someone. He still remembered that kind of piercing pain. If it wasn’t to fulfill Ye Ziyun’s wishes to protect her family, Nie Li of that time would have definitely follow her.

    ‘If it wasn’t for that mysterious Temporal Demon Spirit Book, I wouldn’t be able to come back to life, wouldn’t be able to see her again!’

    Nie Li inhaled a deep breath, calming himself down from his inner excitement. He had always been searching for a chance to get close to Ye Ziyun, but he didn’t want to disturb her. Anyways since the marriage between her and Shen Yue had not been cancelled yet, the current Nie Li felt an urgent need to enhance his strength.

    Only by having strength, could he deter the Sacred family, and then be able to snatch Ye Ziyun from the hands of Shen Yue.

    “You guys go up first, I still have some matters to attend!” Nie Li said to Du Ze, Pu Liao and the trio.

    Du Ze and Lu Piao followed Nie Li’s gaze. Hands holding onto an ancient book, the beauty quietly reading was like an elf in the evening, simply perfect. Wearing a white silk dress, having a graceful demeanour, leaning against the bookshelf. With a dignified posture, quiet and elegant like a lotus out of the water, holy and noble causing one not dare to profane. They instantly knew what Nie Li wanted to do.

    Everyone liked beautiful things. It was just that when facing Ye Ziyun, they didn’t even have the courage to go forward due to their low self-esteem .

    Nie Li walked towards Ye Ziyun.

    “I bet Nie Li will fail in 15 minutes, the prettiest girl in class would definitely ignore him!” Lu Piao said confidently smiling.

    “I hope Nie Li won’t get a blow too big for him.” Du Ze murmured.

    They hid in a corner looking at Nie Li. “He’ll probably get ignored by her. The prettiest girl in class isn’t that easy to go near to, even Shen Yue also failed to get close to her numerous times.”

    Ye Ziyun quietly reading books at dusk, this beautiful scene, Nie Li couldn’t bear to break it.

    Nie Li, unexpectedly, found that the book Ye Ziyun was reading was actually that Book of Divine Lightning Fire.

    Ye Ziyun furrowed her brows while flipping through the book. She was someone that had a strong competitive spirit and was also very hard working, no matter if it was the talent, cultivation, or even her knowledge, they were also far stronger than that of ordinary people. She still had a little bit of pride in her heart, but she realised that the gap between her and Nie Li was actually so huge.

    The stuff in the Book of Divine Lightning Fire was too profound!

    The first volume was translated, which was okay, but, after the first volume, the other volumes were written with the language of the Snow Wind Empire. She didn’t understand any of it!

    On knowledge, Ye Ziyun was indeed stronger than her peers, but she found the wrong guy to compare herself to. After all Nie Li had been reborn.

    Seeing Ye Ziyun holding and flipping through the Book of Divine Lightning Fire, with Nie Li’s understanding of Ye Ziyun, he naturally guessed Ye Ziyun’s thoughts. He couldn’t help but smile as he walked to the side of Ye Ziyun, and teasingly said “So, student Ye Ziyun is also interested in the Book of Divine Lightning Fire?”

    Ye Ziyun then recovered from her deep thoughts. Looking at Nie Li, her face revealed a surprised expression, she obviously did not expect to bump into Nie Li here. Think again, Nie Li was probably here reading books, otherwise how could he have that much knowledge?

    “This book is too profound, I just skimmed through them and realised that I couldn’t read a lot of them.” Ye Ziyun closed the Book of Divine Lightning Fire, elegantly saying while politely keeping her distance with Nie Li.

    Ye Ziyun’s slender figure, although she was a few steps away, subtle fragrance could be smelt from her. Nie Li knew that this was her unique body fragrance, causing one to be mesmerized. This fragrance, so familiar and intimate, was the fragrance in his memories.

    “This Book of Divine Lightning Fire is written with the words from the Snow Wind Empire era. The words from that era are slightly esoteric and hard to understand, but if you can first learn the words from the Black Gold Empire era, you will find them easier to understand and can read the words from the Snow Wind Empire era much more easily.” Nie Li said while smiling.

    “Words from Black Gold Empire era?” Ye Ziyun carefully recalled, before the Age of Darkness, there were 3 eras that were rather well recorded the most powerful empires for each era were, respectively, the Saint Spirit Empire era, the Snow Wind Empire era, and the Sacred Empire era. The Black Gold Empire was a relatively big empire in the era of the Snow Wind Empire.

    Nie Li was well-learnt and knew a lot of stuff, Ye Ziyun couldn’t help but feel a little bit of admiration.

    “But to learn an era’s language to read this book is not necessary. Also with your aptitude, it’s not too suitable to practice Lightning Fire cultivation techniques.” Nie Li’s expressions was calm, unlike other boys who were so reserved and stiff in front of Ye Ziyun.

    After all, Nie Li understood Ye Ziyun too well, down to the depth of her bones.

    “Oh? Then what cultivation technique is suitable for me?” Ye Ziyun said, sizing up the boy in front of her, Nie Li’s knowledge caused her to feel a little dejected and depressed.

    “If I guessed correctly, with your family, someone in the family used soul force to examine your body before, you’re currently practicing Snow Wind cultivation technique, so Snow Wind cultivation techniques are probably the best suited for your physique!” Nie Li said while faintly smiling.

    Ye Ziyun’s eyes widened, shocked as she look at Nie Li, Nie Li actually guessed correctly, her grandfather indeed used his soul force to examine her body before, but that was a secret not known to others, after all examining used up a large amount of soul force; how did Nie Li know of this?

    Seeing Ye Ziyun’s expression, Nie Li knew that he guessed correctly, smiled saying “Although your family examined your physique before, but they definitely couldn’t detect your soul realm’s form, so the cultivation technique he chose might not be suitable for you.”

    “The form of the soul realm?” Ye Ziyun frowned, she didn’t know what that was.

    “How about taking a little bit of time and let me examine your soul force’s form?” Nie Li asked Ye Ziyun.

    Ye Ziyun raised her head looking at Nie Li, thought for a moment and shook her head, “No need!” She still kept her distance from Nie Li. If Nie Li’s method of examining was similar to her grandfather, then it was bound to have some skin contact. Ye Ziyun was still cautious of Nie Li.

    Guessing correctly about what Ye Ziyun was thinking, Nie Li smiled. He knew that Ye Ziyun thought too much, saying, “Actually the method of examining is very simple, get an unused soul crystal when you get back, then by injecting your soul force into the soul crystal, I just need to observe the soul crystal awhile to tell your soul realm’s form.”

    “Oh? That simple?” Ye Ziyun apologetically looked at Nie Li, seems like she misunderstood Nie Li, a single soul crystal wouldn’t need that much money.

    “If you want to test the form of your soul realm, look for me here tomorrow around this time.” Nie Li finished his words, turned around and left.

    Ye Ziyun was astounded while looking at Nie Li. Usually when boys talked to her, they would want to chat for a little longer, but Nie Li was actually an exception. What kind of person was Nie Li actually? She realised she didn’t understand this classmate at all.

    Nie Li had grasped Ye Ziyun’s character. The more he tried to get closer to Ye Ziyun, the further Ye Ziyun would distance herself from him. The future was still long, first leaving a good impression in Ye Ziyun then slowly building up their relationship, was his plan.

    Ye Ziyun clenching her teeth, said “Classmate Nie Li.”

    “What’s the matter?” Nie Li turned his head asking.

    Seeing that Nie Li and Ye Ziyun were talking in the distance and when Nie Li walked away, Ye Ziyun actually called out to him, caused Du Ze, Lu Piao and the group to look at each other dumbfounded.

    “Sure enough, he deserves to be the boss. First, he made Ning’er Goddess take the initiative to send breakfast, and now actually made Ye Goddess call out to him for the happiness of the rest of my life, I need to ask boss for some guidance.” Wei Nan murmured.

    This caused jealousy from bystanders, to be able to speak with Ye Goddess, how many men wished for that kind of thing?

    Du Ze and Lu Piao looked at each other.

    “Seems like we underestimated Nie Li!”

    “This guy is secretive of his skills!”

    “Nie Li hooked up with Ning’er goddess, and he definitely can also hook up with Ye Goddess. holding one on the left and on the right hugging the other, his happiness is boundless!”

    Nie Li didn’t know of the discussions between these brothers, hearing Ye Ziyun calling for him was unexpected, he turned his head back in surprise.

    “Classmate Nie Li’s knowledge on inscription patterns is profound. I have some questions for Nie Li, may I ask them?” Ye Ziyun asked with her bright eyes looking at Nie Li.

    “Of course you can, pray tell.” Nie Li laughed.

    Ye Ziyun did not get her hopes up too high, after all the questions that she wanted to ask weren’t things that ordinary people coudl solve. In terms of understanding inscription patterns, the knowledge of Ye Ziyun, who was born into one of the major families, far surpassed her peers.

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