ATG – Chapter 829

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Chapter 829 – Moonflower’s Maliciousness

“Let’s go!” Sovereign of the Seas Qu Fengyi threw the word out coldly, flinged his sleeve and coldly left… Xuanyuan Wentian had at least said something but she did not even look Feng Hengkong in the eye.

The three venerables who died at the hands of Moonflower had their bodies eroded from the poison and Mo Chenfeng had even turned into dust; they could not bring him back even if they wanted to.

All the Ocean Palace venerables and elders also swiftly followed and left. Zi Ji had stayed until the end, cupped his hands towards Feng Hengkong and said, “Divine Phoenix Sect Master, I bid you farewell.”

“Pardon me for not sending you off,” Feng Hengkong hurriedly returned the greeting.

“Hmph!” Ye Meixie snorted coldly, gathered the people from Sun Moon Divine Hall and left as well.

Huangji Wuyu glanced at Feng Hengkong, before shooting Spiritual Master Ancient Blue with a mundane look. Spiritual Master Ancient Blue then said, “Yuanba, we are going to leave as well.”

“Ahh?” Xia Yuanba turned around, “Master, Lord Sacred Master, my Brother-in-law and Little Sister Xue’er have just gotten engaged, I want to stay for a few more days.”

“That is their matter, and Divine Phoenix Sect’s household matter. How is it appropriate for you to stay?” Spiritual Master Ancient Blue shook his head sternly.

“Yuanba, you should go back.” Yun Che smiled as he said, before silently sending a sound transmission over, “After you leave, I should be immediately returning to the Illusory Demon Realm for a few years and it would probably be hard for us to meet. However, you do not have to worry about my safety because even if Xuanyuan Wentian attacks the Illusory Demon Realm tomorrow, there would be no problem. My master has personally said before that even if the Four Great Sacred Masters were to work together, they might still not be a match for the Little Demon Empress.”

Xia Yuanba clenched his fists tightly but still lightly nodded in the end, “Brother-in-law, for the next few years, I will work hard and cultivate. The next time we meet, I will definitely give you a huge shock.”

“Hahaha, I believe that fully,” Yun Che laughed. All these years, Xia Yuanba brought him far too many miracles and surprises.

Huangji Wuyu brought Xia Yuanba and all the people from Absolute Monarch Sanctuary and left, similarly without saying anything to Feng Hengkong.

In the blink of an eye, the Four Great Sacred Grounds had all left and the atmosphere turned extremely awkward. When the other powerhouses saw this, they also gradually went to bid their farewells.

In a short amount of time, all the Profound Sky powerhouses, that had travelled all the way to attend the banquet, had all disappeared leaving behind a pathetic scene of a Phoenix City where the Phoenix Main Hall that once stood in the city center had been razed to the ground.

Feng Hengkong closed his eyes and inhaled strongly, his throat forced out a sigh that was extremely grim.

Having inherited the position of Divine Phoenix Sect Master and Divine Phoenix Emperor for an entire century, today was the first time that he had clearly felt reality.

Before and after Jasmine left… their predicament was even wider than heaven and earth.

“Sigh.” Feng Tianwei and Feng Zukui also let out a similar deep sigh whereas the other elders and attendants still remained shocked and did not know what to do.

Feng Hengkong’s gaze turned towards Feng Tianwei and Feng Zukui. All three of them looked equally helpless. Feng Hengkong sighed inwardly and walked towards Yun Che and Feng Xue’er.

“Yun Che, you should leave.” Feng Tianwei said, “Your identity of the Illusory Demon Realm Demon Emperor has been revealed. Furthermore, you possess the Mirror of Samsara. The Four Great Sacred Grounds will definitely not let you off. Now that your master has left, no one can protect you… Hurry up and leave to the place you think is the safest. Otherwise…”

Feng Tianwei looked up into the sky, “When everyone has dispersed, they might return immediately.”

Obviously, Feng Tianwei has seen through this as well. After all, during the Devil Sword Conference, he personally witnessed the Four Great Sacred Ground’s attitude towards this “Demon Emperor” as well as their hideous expression when facing the “Mirror of Samsara”.

“I’ll leave immediately.” Yun Che had already planned everything as he held Feng Xue’er’s hand, “However, it will not be me alone. I’ll bring Xue’er along with me.”

Feng Hengkong’s expression flipped as he angrily retorted, “No! Do you want to drag Xue’er into quicksand as well!?”

“No,” Yun Che shook his head firm, “It’s precisely because I’m worried about Xue’er’s safety that I have to bring her with me. Xue’er is now my fiancee. Those people that want to look for me might go after Xue’er when they cannot find me… Especially Xuanyuan Wentian, that despicable sly old fox. He’s definitely capable of doing this!”

“My Divine Phoenix Sect has the protection of the Phoenix God. Furthermore, Xue’er is the successor to the Phoenix God, who would dare to go after her!” Feng Hengkong howled, but right after he spoke, his might suddenly weakened… Because he suddenly remembered that Yun Che has long since known that the Phoenix God was dead.

“Don’t worry, the place that I’m going to bring Xue’er to is undoubtedly the safest place. She will not encounter any danger or face any threats. Otherwise, I would never choose to bring her along. Furthermore…” Yun Che’s voice was very calm and it seemed as though he had everything planned, “I have ways to speed up Xue’er’s cultivation. After I bring Xue’er away, we might not be able to return for years. However, the day that we return, I assure you that Xue’er’s phoenix powers will have grown to a jaw dropping level.”

Yun Che’s voice was so calm that it had an aura which one could not even try to question. Feng Hengkong looked at him for a while, before turning to Feng Xue’er, “Xue’er, do you want to stay at home or follow him?”

“Royal Father…” Feng Xue’er replied softly, “Where ever Big Brother Yun goes, I will follow.”

“…” The corners of Feng Hengkong lips twitched, but he did not speak for a while. He then turned around and let out a long sigh before grimly saying, “Yun Che, when you killed my sons… I fully deserved it and I could force myself to forget. However… if anything happens to Xue’er, I will not let you off even when I become a ghost!”

“Royal Father…” Feng Xue’er’s tears shot out nearly instantly as she said in a trembling voice, “Xue’er is unfilial. She has always made you worry all these years… Big Brother Yun and I will return soon… we will… Royal Father please take care of yourself…”

Feng Hengkong waved his hands behind and did not speak, as though asking them to leave immediately. Towards Yun Che, Feng Xue’er was more than infatuated with him; it could even be said that she had been bewitched by him. Although he could not bear it, was extremely worried and hated Yun Che, for a woman to meet a person she was willing to give her all for, perhaps it could be said to be happiness.

Feng Tianwei and Feng Zukui secretly listened in the entire time but they did not interrupt nor did they affect Feng Xue’er and Feng Hengkong’s final decision. Feng Zukui turned to an elder beside him and said, “Qingshan, go bring all the Three-striped Phoenix Spirit Pellets over and let Xue’er bring them along.”

“Yes.” The old man who was called “Qingshan” turned around and disappeared.

“Big Brother Yun, are we leaving now?” Feng Xue’er asked with tear filled eyes.

“Mn,” Yun Che nodded, “When she left, regardless whether it was my identity or whether it was the Mirror of Samsara that I had on me, I must temporarily leave the Profound Sky Continent. However, this is good as well. After all, I promised to bring you to the Illusory Demon Realm to meet my parents… After we leave here, we’ll go Blue Wind Imperial City to bring along your big sister Cang Yue. Then, we’ll go to Floating Cloud City to bring along Grandpa, Little Aunt, Xiao Yun, and the rest before we proceed to the Snow Region of Extreme Ice to bring the people of Frozen Cloud Asgard… For the next few years or perhaps decades, you will have to stay with me in the Illusory Demon Realm.”

Before he left for the Illusory Demon Realm, he had to bring all related people along… including Frozen Cloud Asgard. Otherwise, they would definitely meet with a great calamity. Furthermore, since had been tasked by the late Gong Yuxian and had already developed strong ties with Frozen Cloud Asgard, he could not leave them behind.

Furthermore, with the massive inner world of the Primordial Profound Ark, bringing along the few thousand members of Frozen Cloud Asgard was an easy feat.

“As long as it’s a place with Big Brother Yun, anywhere is fine,” Feng Xue’er looked at him and gently said. She did not have any worries or fears towards the unknown Illusory Demon Realm.

Just as she finished speaking, she felt Yun Che’s body freeze and she immediately asked, “Big Brother Yun, what’s wrong?”

The calm of Yun Che’s face disappeared and he wore a serious expression. Even his eyes had a brutal gaze.

This feeling…

Why would there be a sudden sense of fatal danger…

This frightening feeling was more frightening than what he experienced when he initially encountered the Moon Slaughter Devil Sovereign in the Moon Slaughter Devil’s nest…

What was it?

Just where exactly did it come from?

He had a frightening sensitivity towards dange. In that previous moment, a sense of danger of unknown origin caused all the hairs on his body to stand. All the nerves in his body tightened as well… That frightening feeling seemed like a giant python’s mouth was just inches above his own head.

However, the surrounding ground had already been levelled by Jasmine. Other than the people from Divine Phoenix Sect, there was no other outsider present nor did any outsider approach. Furthermore, not a single person revealed killing intent. However, this extremely scary dangerous feeling lingered around creepily as though it was borne out of thin air.

Yun Che’s palm grabbed firmly onto the helpless Feng Xue’er and pushed her behind him. He gritted his teeth and scanned the surroundings… Suddenly, on the empty ground, he spotted a strand of very fine and very minor reflection that one usually would not have been able to tell with the naked eye.

After forcefully plucking the Netherworld Udumbara Flower in the Moon Slaughter Devil Nest, Yun Che’s soul force surged after he woke up from his unconsciousness. This extremely minor reflection entered his spirit sense and into his vision.

That was a strand of long hair… Right before Moonflower left, she dropped it from between her fingers.

The black and long strand of hair seemed to possess a dark green glow to it as well.

Yun Che looked at it dumbly before his expression drastically changed. His eyes widened till they nearly burst out as his gathered all the strength in his hands and roughly pushed Feng Xue’er away.

“Xue’er leave, quick!!”


Even before Feng Xue’er, who had been pushed away, managed to regain her composure, a violent piercing noise erupted from behind…

That strand of hair left behind by Moonflower turned into a thick deep green glow and shot towards Yun Che at a speed that he could not react to and could not even comprehend. It shot through his chest and came out from behind scattering the sky with… green blood.


Yun Che was sent flying and landed hundreds of meters away. The green glow then disappeared, but on the left side of Yun Che’s chest, a huge bloodied hole appeared… His heart had been completely destroyed.

The green poison began to spread on the side of the wound… However, it was quickly cleansed by the Sky Poison Pearl and completely disappeared.

Yun Che fell to the ground, his face pale white, his eyes unfocused and his lips trembling with difficulty…


Yun Che’s eyes completely lost any signs of life and he fell silent.

Yun Che had received numerous injuries in his life and many times they were severe. However, his body and willpower exceeded that of a normal man. No matter how severe the injury, he would never let himself become unconscious. Even during the fight with the Moon Slaughter Devil Sovereign where he completely consumed all his profound energy, he managed to forcefully hang on and did not lose conscious immediately.

However, this time, he could not even shout out “Hong’er’s” name and had already lost his conscious. The hole before his chest and the pool of blood belonging to his body was a frightening sight.

Moonflower promised Jasmine not to mention Yun Che to anyone after she returned. This promise, would definitely be kept… because she promised to not mention Yun Che. However, she never said that she wouldn’t kill him.

When she promised Jasmine… or perhaps when she detected Jasmine’s aura on Yun Che, Yun Che had already become a dead person in her eyes.

Although what she left behind was only a thin strand of hair, it possessed extremely frightening poison and divine power. No matter whether it was the poison or the divine power, it could easily poison or obliterate anyone single person from the Profound Sky Continent!

There was no chance of survival at all.

Yun Che possessed the Sky Poison Pearl which cleansed Moonflower’s poison.

He possessed the Dragon God’s Body, and was protected by Rage God’s strength. That was why his body did not disintegrate on the spot. However, that was still the power of a god. Not only had a huge hole been pierced through, the energy that entered his body had torn his body completely apart from the inside, shattering all of his meridians and veins.

chinachu Notice:
I know I stated that I was going to China with mommychu to visit grannychu and was hoping to return sometime June or so, but mommychu struck again, pushing our flight to June 1st. My trip to China is also now extended from June to the middle of July. Due to this trip, the planned double daily month releases for MEN will now be even more delayed. They WILL still come out after my trip though! Any regular chapters for every one of our series will still be coming out when I’m there (MEN 7, ATG 7, SR 8). I will try my best to get them out according to schedule, but if any chapters are missed due to chinachu problems, all of them will be made up when I get home.

I know some people do not read the chapter posts in their haste to read the chapter so I’ll be leaving this message at the bottom of each chapter as a reminder!

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57 thoughts on “ATG – Chapter 829” - NO SPOILERS and NO CURSING

    1. I hate to be a spoiler but…i think he will be reborn thru the gift of the phoenix god…which jasmine did not divulge to yun che, since it may make him too complacent about dying.

      If not that, then some other plot armor, i suppose.

  1. This story has gone to shit, after so long it’s a shame to drop it but it’s no longer enjoyable to read. Thanks translators for all the chapters so far.

    1. most of these stories are like that. just imagine if these writers would get money based on views and ratings, instead of word count and chapter count? these novels would have been at least 10 times better. ATG is using less of these “tactics” like repeating the same things all the time, or writing half a chapter about the crowd talking crap, have you noticed how there is always a crowd whenever something happens? its not a coincidence. take emperor domination for example. great story and writing, but 40% of it is worthless drivel.

      1. So your explanation why a story is shit is just because I don´t like it?
        Ok I got you and should just ignore most of the comments.
        Furthermore yes there are many reactions to an action of the main character and some can be explained cause of the word count but to call it worthless is just wrong.

        1. what are you talking about? go take an argumentation course or something. where did i say that the story is shit? dont infer bs from your own limited imagination. saying something is wrong is not an argument, show me how what i said was wrong.

          so let me get this straight… are you saying that these “reaction” and “random people in the crowd conversations” are good for the story, or have some other value to the story? i hope you are not that naive. they are clearly filler paragraphs to reach the word per chapter/day quota these writers have.

          also, just so you won’t misunderstand, i love these stories. i just hate the system, because these writers are forced to do this. and of course, there are some writers that have no integrity and just write cliche garbage stories with reused and stolen plots just to earn more money.

          you can ask any “veteran” reader here about this. we read a lot of the stuff that is being translated in this community, do you even know how similar most of these stories are? there are some plots that i have seen over a hundred times, and sometimes its being reused in the same story multiple times!

          1. First of all with “the story is shit” was the commentor above you so unrelated to you. Sorry about this misunderstanding.

            So yes in nearly every chinese novels there are many plots which are used repetitively or some kinds of reaction or some kind of method to establish a certain emotion a chapter shall give you. Atg has the crowd´s reaction everytime, but not every reaction from the crowd is worthless or filler.

            First of all different reactions from different people have a different worth. As an example take atg and monarch of the tenth level. It has surely more strength if he is shocked than someone on the the nascent profound lvl. The problem with atg here is rather that some characters are not really established in the world and so their reaction doesn´t held the meaning which the author wants us to have and yes sometimes in atg you could take one or two reactions out cause we readers can recognize that the author wants us to feel the epicness what a character just did or rather we could feel it without the step by step reactions but this doesn´t mean that it is worthless.

            Second in atg you only get to knew the perspective of Yun Che. We know his power we follow him step by step but the contrast to other people or his environment is only established if it is in the story. You could show this difference through an explanation in the story how hard it is to do it what the lead character just did or let people in the novel show you how incredible the lead character is. So reactions have their worth.

            So all in all yes atg is a little bit suffering under the amount of crowd reactions and reactions of too fresh or too little established characters but they are not completely pointless.

            But what really gets me the most is that most of the time I read those comments like this chapter is a filler even if the whole chapter gives new elements to the story so I concluded that those who just don´t like the chapter or the new setting label the chapter as filler. I even read sometimes those who wrote they skip whole chapter and then ask about storyelements they just skipped….cause those chapter were filler cause someone wrote in the commentsection that this chapter is a filler…

            So in summary my point is and I really messed up before to bring it to you at all is that the word filler is just so often used and many times at the wrong places or just false.

    2. You know what if you are bitching and droping this novel just for a book. It seriously means you have a mental problem. Gosh, I don’t even come here anymore. You can’t blame the story is shit, just because of one chapter, that’s wrong. Speaking of wrong, tell me another Xuanhuan which have more better story then this?. Man, every story has it’s ups and downs. Some people here just come when the story reaches it down point and criticise it like no tomorrow. But when it gets good. I cant even see their face?. Afk, who gives you money for that? You are all even worse then that f5 sect. You do nothing just deter the readers mood. Thank god, m a mtl reader and I know if the author writes one bad chapter , then he also has the balls to write 3 good chapter.

      1. your pretty stupid if you think he is saying this is shit just because of one chapter. him losing all his goddamn progress in one chapter …. irks me greatly. destroying all his meridians and veins*

        if he reincarnates and starts from nothing again…. im done. it took 829 chapters for him to almost reach the point of him going to the realm of the gods… if we have to wait another 800+ chapter to get back to this point…. i dont have the willpower.

      2. Lol, the story has been going downhill for hundreds of chapters already, I kept reading it 1) to support the translators and 2) because i felt it was a shame to take it off my list since it started good. And there are a bunch of stories better than this. Anyway, it’s just my opinion, nobody is forcing it on you. The fact you have to resort to personal attacks shows more of who you are rather than me.

    3. I completely agree. I dropped this about 50 chapters ago because the story just falls flat. It keeps recycling the same plot point from the previous arcs before it and nothing actually new (plotwise) happens. At least nothing that we haven’t seen before except it’s the “next level”.

      I comeback and read a chapter every now and then when I’m bored but nothing has changed. It has been going downhill for awhile and that’s sad. Started off good and then like another commentator mentioned tons and tons of filler garbage that doesn’t contribute to the story. It only serves to lengthen the character count. Quantity doesn’t equate to quality and that’s the problem with many of these novels. Many of them could be good quality novels with a third less of the chapters and more substance, but quotas and deadlines create bad writing. End of story. Writing takes time to be good and that’s what these writers don’t get. There is a reason published books take years to write. It’s because the type of filler in these novels never gets written. Traditional authors understand this and that’s why real books aren’t released chapter by chapter on a daily or weekly basis. Because writing in this way produces sub par writing. This is why many of these novels start strong (with a good idea like most stories do) and fall flat a ways in. They don’t have the opportunity to become truly great, because the time is not spent on them.

  2. Ah. I’m guessing the Devil Orb will come into play now? If Yun Che were to turn into a half devil or something, I think that (coupled with LDE) would be more than enough to obliterate the Sacred Grounds).

    1. Well, he actually IS mostly dead this time. The other times people made assumptions, this time some ultra-powerful nasty woman blew his heart out of his chest. That’s not exactly a cliche my friend.

  3. This is such a shit development. You’re saying Jasmine is so stupid she couldn’t see through Moonflower’s intentions? Oh, and Yun Che’s meridans and veins are destroyed? So, he shouldn’t have any cultivation anymore and shouldn’t be able to regain it but he somehow will.

  4. The hell with this development…..
    Bah, if he died then this novel is finished, probably either that devil orb gonna activated as the true devils have the same level power as the gods so he will not die, or PLOT TWIST, samsara mirror activated and yun che reincarnated as jasmine brother without his memories as yun che.

  5. now devil origin reconstructing his meridians and profound veins, evil god veins get overpowered, it gets discovered that evil god was a devil, YC becomes like saiyan race and comes back to life more powerful, steps tyrant realm, fcks all enemys, leave all family and friends in demon realm, go to azure continent, gets the girl, gets the vermelion bird soul blood and legacy, steps in emperor realm, go back to profound sky and kill sword master and sunmoon retard. OR he really get killed and samsara mirror activates again to some new random plot twist, remember that samsara mirros just reincarnates, not exactly in the future it can be in the past, so beware that there is the risk that we can see all the story till now with another perspective.

    1. Sovereign Realm. He already is in Emperor: Emperor (Throne) > Tyrant (Overlord) > Sovereign (Monarch).
      I’m all for the first idea, although I don’t think he needs to reach Sovereign Realm in order to kill anyone in Profound Sky: he’s barely around half Emperor and he’s already destroying almost everyone; if he were to reach Tyrant, not only would (should?) he be able to use Rumbling Heaven easily, he might even be able to use Hades Gate for a while. In any case, once he reaches the Tyrant Realm, no Monarch will be able to stop him, maybe only LDE since she’s half-step into Divine.

  6. Issa joke like usual. Same crap with this author. Either 1) Yun Che is fake dead. 2) Every Yun Che Wedding is crashed. 3) It just so happens by some conveniently written circumstance, that he needs to screw a girl to save her life/raise his cultivation. Predictable. By the time I realized this author couldn’t write well I was already watching Yun Che grope the frozen asgard girls when opening their meridians in the 500s or so. Granted he has his moments but gahdamn, did not live up to the potential the premise of this story had shown in the early days.

    Edit: Silly me, can’t forget about the tournaments.

  7. Thx for the chapter, how original author… this is what the fourth or fifth time ? oh well at least the tiny bits of informations about the rotg

    1. This is the first time he might ACTUALLY be dead. That’s not a repeat!
      All the others were cases of people assuming he’d be dead. This time his heart is hamburger on the walls. Im expecting the devil orb to take over and fix him….or revive him from the dead and convert him into a devil.

      1. Yup. If he comes right back to life, it won’t be the usual “no, he’s dead, I’m so sad!” period of time for his loved ones. And actually, it would be quite a nice development to see him become so strong right away, he’s able to punish the four Sacred Masters immediately, without having to hide for years, first. And then off to find Jasmine and bring her home!

  8. Dude, I’m so done with this light novel. Its not the translators fault and i appreciate their hard work, but oh my god this author is infuriating with this type of writing. So much cheesing in this, and he’s writing style is not by gripping the audience with quality (subjective to others), but rather with anxiety. Like can’t we readers get a break from that bull crap? This novel started out pretty good, but that was just the bait to keep you crawling back for more-just to receive less. Wish there was more variety in this, like even if you didn’t read the machine translations, you can tell whats next after this chapter (pft dying what is that?). Anyways, I’m so tired of this novel being a rinse and repeat filler who’s only strong part is its convoluted harem and stupidly strong MC who still gets his ass kicked for the most random yet similar reasons. Sorry translators I don’t mean to blemish and belittle your work, and honestly I think you translators are amazing for giving us non-chinese speaking readers a chance to read these amazing stories. However, there are many times in which the contents of a novel are such a ridiculous farce and I as a reader ( and a paying patron) have the right to critisize the work in which you are translating and honestly whats the point of the comment section if certain opinions regarding the chapter/novel aren’t allowed. This is referring to commenters who say “stop coming to bitch if you don’t like it”, well I’m sorry, I didn’t know a comment section was only allowed for misguided praise for something that doesn’t deserve much of it. Listen I get that the author grows in terms of writing as the chapters goes on, but jesus christ its almost chapter 850 and we’re still getting the same crap. Yun Che “dies”, people ridicule him and his peers, enemies get cocky, Yun Che gets a power buff from near death , Yun Che plans and talks (or theres a narration on what he’s thinking) about giving an ass wooping, Yun Che is actually alive (gasp),enemies ridicule buffed Yun Che, Yun Che kicks ass- all in a span of 20-80 chapters ofcourse. I as dedicated reader have grown tired of this and although the powers and cultivation of Yun Che is completely badass, the rest of the content of this novel, not so much. In conclusion, thank you translators for this journey,I’m sorry but screw this novel <.<

  9. so every one is thinking about the devil orb, but you forget that he actualy absorb something in exactly the same place, and even jasmin does not know about wat is it
    ps:chinachu does this on purpose no?

        is in this chapter… in the end jasmine says
        “Disappeared?” Jasmine’s expression was just as shocked as Yun Che. She thought about it for a while before speaking in a low voice, “Since it was something that belonged to the Moon Slaughter Devil Sovereign, then it is extremely likely that it is something on the level of the devils! Its mysteries will not be so easily divined by any ordinary power.”

        “But don’t think too deeply about it right now and set it aside for the time being, it may come in use in the future. Right now, you’d be better off focusing your energy and attention on thinking of a way to escape from this place!”

  10. I’m sure when Yun Che reach a level of power when he contend with her, he’ll fall in love and describe her as the most beautiful fairy he ever seen. This story quality is growing more and more pathetic; Yun Che has lost his ruthless nature.

  11. AS far as the story has evolved now, it is impossible to make yun che stronger with out plot armor. To place a plot armor the MC has face danger, it seems the danger of just the four sacred G is not enough, but something from a different world. As all the lucky encounters of this world have been depleted by the MC, its only possible by a danger from the outside. But this development clearly doesn’t make sense. Clearly, if she had such malicious intent she could kill him many ways, if a strand of hair can go unnoticed from Jasmine then many other things can. Clearly, the author made this situation not salvageable, now whatever plot armour he places will be lacking. AS many have started to quit because of the same dying plot, so have I. But in the beginning, as much as I hated it I refused to quit, now its a different matter. It has just become boring. MAKE THE MC STRONGER BY MAKING HIM DIE. Also, the way jasmine got discovered is stupid beyond her character, this is unrefutable. Yes, I hated this book in the beginning due to the Harem build up. now that hardly seems to be the crux of the matter. I want to quit, but the unresolved issues and the closures of certain emotions will make me want to read it again at a future time. I can’t stop reading but i won’t recommend this book to anyone, not unless its an enemy. untill then adios.

  12. *sigh* all this hate for the series…Like many have mentioned stories all have their ups and downs. If you don’t like it…Don’t read it???? All these “I just continue it for the translators and the such.”…If you actually REALLY did not like the series you would STOP reading it. which if enough dropped the novel would probably lead to a knew novel being translated…Yet here we are.

    Now to relevant novel talk…..I am agreeing with the “Phoenix’s gift”. If the author does not use that….I would honestly facepalm so hard my head would explode cause…”Rising from the Ashes” Is what one should expect to come from a Phoenix’s gift. Now the catch is what might the price be?

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