ATG – Chapter 193

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Chapter 193 – The Primordial Azure Dragon’s Request

Under Yun Che’s forcefulness, Chu Yuechan’s weak struggles amounted to an exercise in futility. In the blink of an eye, her flawless, snowy white body that looked as though it had been sculpted from jade or ice, had become completely uncovered in front of Yun Che… and when her last ‘barrier’ was broken through by Yun Che’s charge, her mental defensive perimeter instantly, completely collapsed as well.

This was a world separated from the outside world; it was incomparably silent. And thus, the sounds of a man and a woman joining together were exceptionally clear, striking against their ears and souls. In this place, nobody would be able to bother them; there wasn’t even any wind.

Her agitated attempts at resisting slowly transformed into increasingly charming sounds of panting. Her minute struggling movements slowly, unconsciously transformed into a welcoming acceptance. After several tempestuous, emotional rounds, at the location where their bodies pressed tightly against each other, his virgin Yang and her virgin Yin finally completed their perfect union.

Yun Che lay there, his mouth open as he panted roughly. His hands were holding Chu Yuechan’s soft, slick white back. Chu Yuechan quietly lay there against his chest, her beautiful eyes shut, seeming to have fainted. The quiet, sorrowful tears that silently leaked out had left tear stains that had yet to dry.

Biologically speaking, Yun Che truly had been a virgin. Mentally, however, he definitely was not. In the Azure Cloud Continent, he and Su Ling’er had been together for many years, and although the number of times they had coupled in the ‘inverted phoenixes’ position might not have reached into the thousands, it had certainly reached into the hundreds. When he thought back to it, however, back then his heart had been completely filled with hatred, and so he had essentially been giving vent to his bestial lust upon Su Linger’s body. Today’s ‘storm’ was one of a gentle wind and drizzling rain. It really was his first time…and this made him feel even more regret towards Su Ling’er.

Only, although it was a ‘gentle wind with drizzling rain’, this had still ‘tormented’ Chu Yuechan quite a bit. This was because his body possessed the Great Way of the Buddha, and had also just fused the Dragon God’s bloodline, making the strength of his body far superior to an ordinary person’s. He had spent more than two full hours entangling Chu Yuechan’s charming, fragile, virgin body before finally releasing what the Primordial Azure Dragon had referred to as the ‘virgin Dragon seed’. Chu Yuechan had been ravaged like a tender lotus in a tornado. Her upper body, her lower body… every part of her body was covered with traces of the storm.

After the wind and the rain, the two remained tightly coupled to each other. Yun Che secretly looked at the quiet, silent Chu Yuechan. Even after a long period of time passed, he didn’t say anything. He didn’t know what he should currently say to her. In his head, however, now came the bellowing shouts of Jasmine.

“You BASTARD! Lowlife! Pervert!! You actually caused me to see this sort of a scene! And hear those unmentionable sounds for so long… If I didn’t have to rely on you for now, even though you are my disciple, I would definitely kill you!!”

Jasmine’s voice was filled with anger, and it was even quivering slightly. Yun Che rolled his eyes; his face didn’t even redden. He replied quietly, “All you had to do was seal off your six senses and make it so that you couldn’t hear or see anything.”

“Bastard! Lowlife! Pervert!” Jasmine began to bellow again.

“…Haha, this is a type of normal human behavior. The first time, perhaps you might truly be unaccustomed to it, but after you see it a few more times, you’ll naturally grow accustomed to it.”

“Pervert! Pervert!! PERVERT!!! You are exactly what my mother and big brother told me about, a PERVERT who I absolutely, absolutely, absolutely can’t get close to!”

After finishing her howling, Jasmine said nothing else and paid no more attention to Yun Che.

At this moment, from the place they were conjoined, he suddenly sensed an icy aura violently surge into his body, causing his entire body to grow stuff. His consciousness instantly was dispersed, and he fainted. As he fainted, that powerful, icy energy moved from the inside to the outside, quickly covering his entire body and causing tendrils of icy, misty energy to rise above his form.

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As Yun Che lay in his coma, he didn’t know how much time had passed.

He remained within that dark world, but Chu Yuechan’s form was no longer by his side. The only thing remaining was a red ‘blossom’ on the ground and several marks, which testified that what happened had been no dream.

“Young human, you have awakened.”

Within the darkness appeared two blue lights. Two enormous azure blue eyes had opened in the air above.

“Why did I…faint?” Yun Che pressed against his head. His body didn’t feel strange at all; his earlier sudden fainting had caused him to feel very confused.

“After the two of you joined your Yin and Yang together, she gained your True Dragon’s virgin seed. Her wounds were completely healed, and, as I anticipated, her newborn Profound Veins allowed her to make a huge breakthrough, and she directly entered the Emperor Profound Realm. As for you, after you gained her virgin Yin, your body gained a powerful ice-attribute profound energy. Unfortunately, your profound energy was originally of the fire-attribute. Fire and ice just so happen to counter each other, and so not only was the ice-attribute energy of no benefit to you, it actually clashed against your Phoenix flames. The reason why you suddenly passed out was because these two types of diametrically opposed energy suddenly began to clash with each other.

“Your ice-attribute energy has now been completely suppressed by the flames of the Phoenix. If my guess is correct, you have already gained the ice-attribute profound energy that woman had on her.”

The words of the Primordial Azure Dragon caused Yun Che to be stunned. He somewhat calmed himself down, then suddenly discovered that within his consciousness, there was a powerful ice-attribute Profound Art…

The Frozen Cloud Arts!!

In addition, it was the Frozen Cloud Arts that had already reached the sixth realm, of being able to “activate the celestial snow”!

This discovery greatly shocked Yun Che. Of course he had heard of the saying, ‘dual Yin Yang training’, but the true essence of ‘dual Yin Yang training’ lay in harmonizing Yin and Yang, helping them make up for each other’s deficiencies. Perhaps the attribute of one’s energy might be transformed through dual Yin Yang training, but to gain the other person’s complete Profound Art after coupling with them…

This was completely unheard of!

Wait a moment! Yun Che suddenly thought of something. Could it be that the reason why Frozen Cloud Asgard absolutely forbade the disciples of the palace from losing their chastity was actually precisely because…the Frozen Cloud Arts could be completely transmitted to a man through the virgin Yin?

As Yun Che pondered this, the more he thought about this, the more likely it seemed. The results of ten or tens of years of cultivation by the disciples of Frozen Cloud Asgard… if a man could take away their chastity, then without any effort at all, he could gain it all. How unfair was that! At the same time, it would result in their sect’s Profound Arts being transmitted to outsiders. If word of this spread, without question, there would be countless greedy eyes which would stare at every single disciple of Frozen Cloud Asgard. Despite how powerful Frozen Cloud Asgard was, they would be thrust into tremendous danger.

So that was the reason why…the women of Frozen Cloud Asgard were forbidden from developing relationships with any man, and until the day they died, they were not permitted to lose their chastity. It wasn’t because love would impact their training of the Frozen Cloud Arts; it was because of this…

The Primordial Azure Dragon continued, “Generally, you will need to use the Frozen Cloud Arts to lock up the ice-attribute energy as much as possible. Otherwise, if it explodes forth, it will probably result in tremendous damage to your body…unless, of course, you are able to find the water-attribute Evil Seed which the Evil God left behind. Only the Water Seed of the Evil God is capable of letting ice and fire, these two diametrically opposed attributes, to perfectly coexist within a single person’s body.

“…You know that my body has the profound veins of the Evil God?” Yun Che raised his head.

“I can even detect the bloodline of the flames of the Phoenix, so how could I possibly not recognize the aura of the Evil God? Aside from that, your body also has the aura of the divine power of the Rage God and of Sirius the Sky Wolf. The reason why you were able to pass these trials was because you relied on these powers. Your situation makes me sigh in amazement, and also makes me, for the first time, desire to see what a human’s future is.”

The voice of the Primordial Azure Dragon was filled with deep regret.

“The Evil God’s Water Seed. I will try to find it.” Yun Che said. Sensing the additional ice-attribute energy in his body, he murmured in his heart, “I won’t let the energy that you bestowed upon me with your chastity to forever be sealed…”

He raised his head and asked calmly, “And her? Where did she go? Did she say…when she would return?”

“She left. She didn’t say when she would be back.” The Primordial Azure Dragon replied.

“…Then before she left, did she want to kill me?” Yun Che asked in a rather lost manner.

“She raised a sword and pointed it at your vital points, but from the moment she lifted up the sword to when she put the sword away, she never had a hint of a true killing aura. I could tell that she was just struggling in her heart about something… She stared at you for a long time, then left. But when she left, she didn’t seem very resolute; at the very least, as she left, she turned to look at you three times.”

Yun Che’s eyes trembled, and the lost look on his face vanished and was replaced with a calm smile. “Thank you, Primordial Azure Dragon. You not only bestowed me with power, you truly rescued her as well.”

In his heart, he added another phrase: If it wasn’t for you, I wouldn’t have even gotten close to being able to enjoy Little Fairy’s body…

“Heh heh heh heh, you don’t need to think me. I simply wished to, for my own sake, find an ideal candidate for the transmission of my lineage. However…if you truly do feel gratitude for what you have gained, then can you agree to a request of mine?”

The word ‘request’, when spoken, carried a slight tremble to it. As the Primordial Azure Dragon, the leader of the countless divine beasts of the Divine Realm, how often had it ever ‘requested’ anything from others? A request from the Primordial Azure Dragon…this was something that a normal person couldn’t even fathom.

Yun Che nodded solemnly. “Speak. Although I cannot guarantee that I will definitely be able to assist you, as long as it is within my powers, I will definitely try to do everything I can.”

“It is enough for you to answer me in this manner. My request is indeed far too difficult for you. You might spend your entire life without being able to even come close to the borders of this request, but the strength in your body, as well as your soul, makes it so that I can’t keep myself from feeling hopeful… I hope that you, sometime in your life, will be able to find a sword.”

“A… sword?” Yun Che was stupefied. “What sort of a sword?”

The Primordial Azure Dragon didn’t directly answer this question. Instead, he said slowly, “Have you heard of the place known as the ‘Realm of the Gods’?”

“Realm of the Gods?” Yun Che shook his head. “I’ve never heard of it.”

“The Realm of the Gods is also known as the Divine Realm. In the Primordial Era, the Gods dwelled there. That is an incomparably enormous plane, ten thousand times greater than the Profound Sky Continent you currently reside in. Afterwards, the Gods fell, but the Divine Realm didn’t grow empty because of this. It became filled with countless humans, who took over this world that was formerly of the Gods and who searched for and fought over all the things which the Gods left behind… Relics, weapons, spiritual medicines, lineages, profound arts, and more. Afterwards, by relying on the divine relics that they found, they erected increasingly large and powerful clans, forces, lands, and even miniature worlds.”

A dazed look was in Yun Che’s eyes, as though he were hearing the words of the heavens.

“That place also has the lineage that I left behind. I learned these things only through the remnant spirits that remain in that place. The current Divine Realm is no longer a world of the True Gods; rather, it has been chopped up into many spheres of power by the countless inheritors of the lineages of the Gods. It has become the plane with the highest levels of power in this era. In addition, the Divine Realm is incomparably large. Everyone continues to imagine that there must be more divine relics that have yet to be discovered, and so every day, many people will go to search for them…and in particular, they are searching for a sword. That sword has already disappeared countless years ago. Ever since the Gods were annihilated, not even a hint of it has appeared. However, its power and might made it so that people are unable to give up the search for it.

“That sword’s name is the Heaven Punishing Ancestral Sword.”

“You possess one of the Seven Heavenly Profound Treasures, the Sky Poison Pearl. Naturally, you should understand what it means to be in possession of one of the Seven Heavenly Profound Treasures. As for that Heaven Punishing Ancestral Sword, it is ranked as number one amongst the Seven Heavenly Profound Treasures! According to legend, its power is enough to annihilate everything. It entirely lives up to its title of being the number one supreme treasure. Even if it falls into the hands of a mortal, that mortal will still be able to easily slaughter True Gods and smite the Heavens!”

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alyschu note: inverted phoenixes position = 69


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94 thoughts on “ATG – Chapter 193” - NO SPOILERS

  1. “In his heart, he added another phrase: If it wasn’t for you, I wouldn’t have even gotten close to being able to enjoy Little Fairy’s body” Ruthless Che is ruthless.

      1. the 2 hours thing is explained pretty well so there’s nothing he could do about that.

        according to most experts on the issue i have heard talk about it, rape isn’t about sex, its about power. This was definitely about sex, with the goal of actually returning power to her- Power he couldn’t even hope to compete with. I’d say if anything, the word rape just doesn’t apply to the situation well, since in real life there is no possible circumstances that would create a situation like this. All I can say is that within the setting and situation, i think he did the right thing. Obviously little fairy agreed since she didn’t kill him or punish with in any way.

        If hes thinking he enjoyed it, well that’s probably for the best. I mean, he could be thinking “urg, that was so disgusting i want to puke. I just had to have sex with a paralyzed girl who hasn’t been able to maintain basic hygiene for five months.”

        1. “rape isn’t about sex, its about power. This was definitely about sex”

          Well, she was definitely physically powerless you know? Your argument is literally wrong somehow.

          I’m not sure she would have allowed him to do her even to restore her body, IF she had the strength to physically reject him. “It smells like …, it looks like …, thus it’s most likely rape”. This is a fact and some people will have issues to come to terms with that. Unfortunately, I’m one of those.

          Well, it wont stop me from reading ATG though. It’s just giving me a bitter aftertaste. I just hope Chu Yuechan will be able to get through that.

          1. “I’m not sure she would have allowed him to do her even to restore her body, IF she had the strength to physically reject him.”

            I’m positive she would not have allowed it. She’s not making that choice for personal reasons, but for her sect. She knows why its banned, and that if someone figures out he has the fozen clouds power, and why, its a disaster for her sect. At the end, even if she didn’t blame him and felt nothing but gratitude towards him, she knows her sect would absolutely demand his death. Leaving him alive is as good as choosing him over her entire sect.

          2. No, you’ve just been brainwashed by current society about putting rape in a black and white setting. Just as she has been brainwashed to protect her chastity to the death. She obviously has feelings for him, but a rule you’ve lived by your whole life isn’t broken in a few days. Her reaction to quickly say no is a matter of reflex, even when it started, the author showed she got into it too. Yes, she would have most likely stopped him if she had her power, but you’re again looking at this in a black and white view, none of this would have even been brought up if she hadn’t lost her powers in the first place. The author clearly created circumstances in which it would be possible. That’s how many things are achieved in life, be it reality or fantasy, circumstances and luck. And when all was said and done, she was fighting with her feelings along the lines of “Have I broken my beliefs or was enjoying being with someone which I have some kind of feelings for the right thing”. He literally protected her 24/7 for 5 months from death. No matter who you are that will result in some kind of attraction. Then there’s the matter of her being a cripple, as ixion said, this situation isn’t something that will happen in reality. At least I haven’t heard of a physical illness that can be cured through sex. But that’s what fantasy does, bring situations that can’t happen in reality but give them real solutions, no matter if they go against your own beliefs. So did the main do wrong by helping her though sex? do you just feel wrong because he enjoyed it?do you feel sex as an idiotic way to cure an illness? would you have accepted this scene if he hated himself adamantly for having to force her to have sex with him in order to heal her body? I bet you would have. But what would you have done in that situation? respect her wishes? leave her alone? take her with you? that’s not a solution, he ca’t take care of her his whole life, what if she decides to kill herself like she did before? would you not have sex with her in order to keep your consciousness intact? Are you seeing what I’m trying to tell you here? This isn’t as simple as saying “This was rape, it was wrong and I hate it”

          3. Oddly, I’m with Nellion. I despise rape, but this particular situation was the only way to help a cripple ‘walk’ again. Yes, he enjoyed it. I’m not sure why it took two hours, and it sounded like he bukake’d her (every part of her body was covered with traces of the storm.).
            I also agree that the ice users are brainwashed to think that ‘love’ will get in the way of their training. Willpower seems to be one of the most powerful forces that push martial arts forward in wuxia/xianxia, and ‘love’ is most definitely one of the (if not THE) number one ways to gain power. And loving someone that is in danger or needs their help is always a huge deal in power ups to the characters that actually have a love interest. Look at what Chu Feng did recently in MGA.
            With the ice style already shortening their lives, forcing them to ‘not love’ seems remarkably cruel, don’t you think?

          4. Lets just wait and see how the parties respond before we blow the rape whistle. People keep forgetting that the setting is an alternate world, with other values and another world history, and maybe your programmed moral code isn´t universally applicable in every situation. From a consequentialism standpoint he is in the right, and all in all it pretty much boils down to whether Yuechan accepts it or not after having thought it through. Just because You are uncomfortable with the situation, doesn´t mean that the novel is bad, or that the sequence of events is a bad plot mechanic.

          5. I interpreted rape as. Being forcefully “taken”. I dont think there’s a need to expand it.
            The woman rejects it, even if its for her. She still rejected it.
            While the only choice left for her is
            Sex = cure
            paralyze
            die
            As ive seen it. Its true that she already like(mybe love) Chu Feng. But she still doesnt WANT to have her chastity taken.

          6. Lol I enjoy reading those comments more then story lately.

            To be honest I don’t real care, I meant its just a story and realise it’s a different world but why are people trying so hard to say it isn’t rape?

            She said no, then was physical restrained and force. The fact that it would heal her, she seemed to enjoy it and is brainwashed from sect is unrelated.

            You’re pretty much saying its ok to rape cult people as long as you make it feel good for them. Or that doctors can rape there patients if it’s healthy for them.

            And yun che was way too eager to do the deed. I mean as soon as a magical dragon said sex will save her, he basically needed no more convincing and just forced himself on her. If it was just to save her then the kissing and groping was unnecessary

    1. Before that sentence it was possible to tell myself “He is just doing this to save her life” now it sounds like he was just waiting for a justification to rape her…

  2. Hey!have been on wuxia for a long time but i only joined now. Just wanted to say thx for giving us the opportunity to read such amazing stories,especially to u alyschu!have been following ur work since tensei shitara datta slim ken,n of all the novels on wuxia world,ATG is definitely the best! But i really miss the old time,when i first stumbled on it,n i had a hundred chapters to go through :'(… Anyway,please keep the good work,n thx again :D!

  3. “Bastard! Lowlife! Pervert!”
    I forgot he had an audience O.O
    What are you doing to a little girl, Yun Che…

    And it’s kind of awkward to think that Yun Che 69’d with that other girl in his past life.
    Oh well, now he has a new target in his sights… Sword Quest Get!

    1. What she is doing is equivalent to peeping, seeing as she has a very simple way to not observe the action. How old is Jasmine btw? Cant remember if she is as young as her body would suggest, and also the whole situation with her being stuck in the pearl and being poisoned probably affects her growth, since she technically doesn´t have a body.

  4. LMAO!! he went for over 2 hours???? guess another benefit of the great way of the buddha jasmine didnt tell yun che about or perhaps her brother didnt tell her either lol

    1. “Hello sister i am related to by blood, and who is really underage, let me tell you all about how this awesome new body technique also greatly increases the power of boners!”. Can´t imagine any way Jasmines brother could have included this piece of information in any decent way.

  5. Finally Yun Che got rid of that virgin body of his…
    Though, I feel a little sorry for Little Fairy, who has a complicated heart about Yun Chen.
    I also feel very very soory for Jasmine who was watching and hearing all the action between Yun Che and Little Fairy.

    Thanks for doing this Chapter XD

  6. So probably the Realm of the Gods is where Jasmine is from, maybe being the last of the gods. I wonder if she wants to kill every person on the realm because she considers them accomplices to the death of her family (they probably poisoned them or something), or if the realm is so huge that the 28 billion she mentioned is only a part of it.

  7. “his virgin Yang and her virgin Yin”, “inverted phoenix”, “virgin Dragon seed”, “ravaged like a tender lotus in a tornado”… this chapter left me speechless… poor Jasmine.

    I don’t know, I read comments of people trying to justify this but it gave me a “rape” aftertaste nevertheless. It wasn’t as lovely as I thought it would be… well, to each his own I guess.

    1. Rape aftertaste???

      “Under Yun Che’s forcefulness, Chu Yuechan’s weak struggles amounted to an exercise in futility.”

      Aftertaste? Really?
      Wow the struggle is real…

      1. Yun Che has killed millions of people, tormented and hurt people beyond repair, and i never really saw any comments saying it went over the line or that it was inappropriate to read. But when he sleeps with a woman in order to save her from life as a cripple, with no ill intent, and no descriptions that indicate he did anything to worsen the experience for her, people lose their minds. Its only in our society, where the fear of death, pain and mutilation is so foreign, that people can overlook genocide and torture, but blow up over a sexual act that may not be viewed as a bad thing in the long run anyway.

        1. You are so making this point at the wrong person! Hahahahahaha!! When did I ever call him a villain or anything, this is hilarious.
          I have no problem with the silly excuse for Yun Che to get laid. It has happened now, whatever.

          My problem is people pretending it isn’t rape. Even though it clearly is rape, it fits every definition of rape.

          People can do bad things for good reasons. Case and point here. No one likes rape, but everyone readily thinks she’d rather be a strong practitioner than a cripple, so no matter what anyone actually says, we all agree she will prefer the future after her rape.

          BUT IT’S STILL RAPE!

          Thank you for making me laugh. This made me laugh more than the last 3 chapters of All The Girls. Thank you!!!

          1. “The quiet, sorrowful tears that silently leaked out had left tear stains that had yet to dry.”

            I so agree with you The-Wandering-Dragon.

          2. No problem, you repaid the favour by really underlining my point, i´m satisfied, can´t say i made it through your comment without some chuckles myself. It´s astounding how you make no decent arguments, and yet fill up so much space with your comment, utterly remarkable. I made the point that people are overly sensitive to something as long as its sexual, and you still focus so hard on that, and cry “rape rape rape”. I will admit that it was non-consensual sex, but my problem is that people are so completely programmed by our overly sensitive society, that an action is instantly 100 times worse if even the tiniest bit of sexuality is involved. I didn´t say it was okay, I´m just calling people out being hypokritts.

          3. “I will admit that it was non-consensual sex”

            Well, isn’t that the very definition of rape. Just like The-Wandering-Dragon, you do agree that it was rape then.

            It’s always funny reading people flaunting the “you’re formated by modern society” argument while trying to justify “rape is fine, it’s just sex”.
            I’m sorry, but rape is no sex. It’s brutality.
            The hypocrisy stands where people are trying to make it look fine. From my point of view, a MC raping girls is no different from a MC killing innocent people around. I will not say it’s a good thing.

          4. Cheers Arua for having a modicum of common sense.
            And Lebrew….oh poor Lebrew, you clearly don’t read MGA…

          5. (Ran out of time to edit because of new chapter so please excuse the double post)

            Just realised using the word modicum comes across as rude… sorry about that Arua. Gotta watch my snarky fingers. Taking swipes even when I don’t want them to T.T

          6. Lol I love it when people keep comparing it to murder and society.

            Yes he murders people, but no one is claiming it’s not murder.

            But when he rapes someone everyone is all like “well it’s not really rape, she liked it and was brainwashed and he did it for her own good etc. etc.

            Dude, rape is rape!

            Also don’t really care that much, it’s a fictional story, but you seriously can’t be trying to justify that it isn’t rape.

            Side note: anyone read book called prince of thorns (not a web novel). Best fantasy book ever and based around 13 year old kid who murders and rapes ton of people.

          7. Funny how I feel like I’m at the other end of the discussion now as few days ago I said that yun che wasn’t a sexist from his “a woman needs a man” comment

        2. Your argument in basic form Lebrew:
          ‘If no one bats an eye at murder, no one should bat an eye at rape either’.
          The morality of this situation should be assessed individually and not comparatively. Both acts are wrong, and neither should be justified. However you seem quite intent in rationalising rape, and pinning the blame on social norms.

          Putting that all aside, even the fact that you term the event as a “sexual act” instead of rape shows your lack of care towards its repercussions.

          You have a serious “if murder cannot be deemed unethical then nothing can” attitude.

  8. “You BASTARD! Lowlife! Pervert!! You actually caused me to see this sort of a scene! And hear those unmentionable sounds for so long… If I didn’t have to rely on you for now, even though you are my disciple, I would definitely kill you!!” calm down girl sooner or later you too will…

  9. Thanks for the chapter, choco, alyschu, Caleb G and Rosalio C! Dear WuxiaWorld, many thanks to the Author, Translator, Editor, Donor!
    Wooohooo! This was another pleasurable chapter to read, no kidding =3 ???

  10. [Don’t read if you’re not into dissecting stuffs]

    I actually feel very pitiful for Chu YueChan. and in an extent to entirety of the Asgardian sect.

    In this chapter, YueChan gets raped, and how should i put it, overwhelmingly dominated. Broken in physically and mentally. All her resistances beyond futility. I’m not going to talk about the mechanics or whatever, but the author has put in some really interesting choice of idioms and expressions of the act. 1 round = 2 hours, and its a few rounds. Behind the choice of words, its quite graphic actually.

    But I feel sad for YueChan not because of the act, but more of the way she was, let’s just say ‘fated’ by the author (at least if we take into the acccount that authors are technically the ‘god overseer’ characters in wuxia / xianxia universes) .

    I think because of my binge speed reading (I literally completed reading up to this chapter from prologue in under 48 hours [with sleep and all]) so I must have missed out some key details, but I recall somewhere that YueChan is Qingxue’s master. This is important because if we take into considerating of Qingyue’s words (somewhere during marriage arc in the begining of ATG) Qingyue goes something like “my master taught me never to look down at people who are inferior to us (in terms of power difference?)”, but YueChan herself ‘despises’ contact with the male gender. Not sure if she’s on ‘men-phobia’ level or not though. I have suspicion that YueChan is actually more outspoken of her verbal thoughts than XingYue.

    Utterly emotional for YueChan for now. I’m not sure how old she is at this chapter (but she should be in the 30s?) and she literally got violated thoroughly by an ‘underaged’ (then again in the typical wuxia/xianxia, as long as you hit puberty = adult, so Yun Che is an adult technically speaking I guess) with no means to resist at all. Not even verbal resistance.

    Imagine that you’re YueChan. You grew up, practice / cultivate, being taught / indoctrinated that ‘don’t hang around with men’, they are bad people, etc etc. You have a disciple that somehow is allowed to ‘marry’, but you teach your disciple ‘don’t look down on people who are inferior to you (even if its of male gender)’, then you get poisoned, and got healed by this one guy, you take ‘intellectual interest’ in the guy, made promise to protect him for 3 months (despite not needing to do so), then makes a hasty call to help retrieve a pendant, encounters two gigantic dragons, and loses all hope in life. You resign yourself to one last moment of “dong quai yi chun” (if i’m gonna die, i’m gonna drag at least you to hell with me / last ditch kamikaze) despite the fact that you can run away (for reasons not mentioned by the Author).

    You killed a dragon, and then you lose everything you’ve mustered. Everything you’ve gained, worked so hard for. Everything.

    Then a boy (that you just barely know, but you know he’s that damn good in healing) comes to you, convinces you that there’s a way (or at least the dragon said so), and you gain some hope, but again find its meaningless because you have to endure (as a cripple) against a series of test. Your rescuer does this for you, and after its all over, you gain some hope “well at least i’m not going to be a cripple, if there’s a way”.

    Only to find that the dragon trolls you so hard by saying “you need to be impregnated, very spesfically. Not ‘you need to consumate physical relationship’ and be done with it” (then again the dragon has its own agenda as to why the dragon is so insistent that the MC(Yun Cher) must impregnate YueChan). The complete antithesis of everything you’ve been taught.

    Your mind races in confusion, and before anything, the guy comes in and violate you, and you’ve got no way to put up a meaningful resistance. Its not a 5 minute thing, (just read the entire chapter and soak it in).

    Utterly, totally dominated. violated. physically and mentally broken through.
    (I don’t think the logics of “Stockholm syndrome is applicable”, but it is strongly implied that she (YueChan) really gave in to everything.

    If i’m YueChan, i’ll probably, despite gaining everything, run and hide for a long time. You can’t meet your sect, your family, and there’s no loved ones (at least those willing to sacrifice themselves for family bonds, or male kins). Its also implied she knows that she’s already impregnated. (you have to remember traditional chinese values don’t favour women who are in a physical relationship outside of marriage, but its definitely okay for a man, LOL)

    I really hope that the Author will ‘take good care’ of YueChan, she deserves so much more (more than XingYue)

    But then, in a way YueChan is lucky, that Yun Cher takes good care of all of his ‘women’ (emphasis on plural). I really want some good karma for YueChan.

    I really feel she doesn’t need to be treated like a ragdoll (at least QingYue doesn’t get the treatment, but then again her fate isn’t better since Asgard sect has literally put their entire eggs into her basket or something)

    1. I didn’t keep reading because it quickly seemed to have strarted smelling of spoilers… It’s fine if you ‘warn people to not read’, but that doesn’t even tell us that you are spoiling… Which is by the way prohibited in the comment section…

      1. I read all of it Caladbolg, I don’t think they’re spoiling, just empathising with little fairy’s plight in a big way.

        If it is spoiling, it’s been well wrapped in a bubble of inference, because it doesn’t read like spoilers. (Or at least it doesn’t to me.

      2. There is no spoilers anywhere in this. Also I don’t think she is Qingyue teacher(personal thought not spoiler). Think they have same last name but different first name.

        About badiyee comment. Summarised a lot of what I was thinking but too lazy to write. This scene could get hugely emotional and complex if author went that direction. Or could just be a sex scene.

        Major troll from dragon and then without any prior discussion, yun che just rapes her within seconds of dragon leaving. I really want the plot to progress as fast as possible but that’s some serious emotional scarring that she got

        1. What I really don’t like, how should I put it… is that “what happened to Chu YueChan” and “how it happened”. Chu YueChan isn’t exactly the most likeable character, but she definitely is a character I grew fond of, despite I didn’t really like her initially.

          That said, I find it emotionally gut-wrenching that she’s been an object, a plaything for both Yun Che’s lust and the dragon. The dragon was of course being selfish, because of really trying to help both the MC and YueChan, it was actually behaving towards its original programming, that was to continue the lineage of the dragon. Therefore it took interest to manipulate YunChe’s lust, as the dragon said both Yun Che and Chu YueChan is very compatible with each another (therefore for whatever reasons, the dragon deduced that it had to capitalize on the opportunity instead of allowing Yun Che to pick someone of his / her choice to procreate and have a child with), and the rest is stated as in the chapter.

          Its just that I really feel bad for Yue Chan, because she really is broken. Her crippled body isn’t just on the veins, but she physically is ‘vegetable’ (no offense to vegans), and it wasn’t a voluntary circumstance for her.

          Thinking back

          1) Yun Che made her to promise 3 things (and she actually delivered, such as her name, albeit not on the spot), that’s a lot of favour, not including of the 3-month ‘guard me please’ favour.
          2) Yun Che dangled a carrot to open up her Profound Gates (I think he offered to even open up more, but not all), she took it (in a hurry), and then lost all of it in a life-and-death duel. Dragon hints at her that she can get repaired, she literally gets tricked because Yun Che is so ‘eager’ to bone her.

          so
          1) she somehow ‘transfers’ her cultivated arts and moves to Yun Che (good for MC since he managed to carbon copy an entire set of cultivated arts), but on other hand she loses. She has performed two taboos, one is to enter a relationship with a male, and two to give away her cultivation to another person outside of the Frozen Asgard Sect. So how has she gained? Assuming either a) she gains fire aspect, she couldn’t even use it and it conflicts her ice-based cultivation or b) she doesn’t gain any fire related cultivation, just a profound vein that’s dragon related (which have no bearing on the ice related cultivation) then she gained truly nothing. She lost.

          2) it was heavily implied that she got pregnant (apart from being covered entirely in … something i’m not sure whether to say or not), and let’s forget about plot armor and all (since she’s probably one of Yun Che’s harem), the treatment that she has received thus far is very unjust.

          She leaving Yun Che without telling him or the dragon would be normal. However, I’m just worried about what she’ll do.

          a) will she keep the baby? (there is no need for her to do so, and she’s got very conflicting views about Yun Che as her domestic partner, LET alone being associated with him. She doesn’t know Yun Che as the “he will be the most ultimate being in the universe”). She certainly doesn’t owe a favour to the dragon too, and it was the dragon that wanted to continue its lineage and found YueChan as a perfect womb for continuing its lineage. Even if let’s say she readily agreed, how would she feel about the relationship? She’s much older than Yun Che, and he’s just a raging teenager. The society will frown, her sect will frown, not sure about her family. She’s done for in terms of her reputation. A humiliation to her body, physical, soul. On all levels. A true nightmare.

          b) if she doesn’t keep the baby, what will she do? its not something that she can just go back to Asgard and say “hey sistas, nothing happened, but I er..” (very complicated)

          That’s why I’m so utterly emotionally disturbed for Chu YueChan. She left him, and I don’t know if we’re gonna see YueChan again, and / or her baby.

          So frustrating!

          1. Just on your point 1) , it was stated Yun Che acquired the ice art but not that Yue Chan lost them, it could simply that the MC acquired a copy of it without hurting the original (a kinda once in a lifetime opportunity)

            And the dragon stated she “has a high possibility of directly breaking through the bottleneck, and reaching an even higher realm.”

            So, assuming she has the opportunity to exchange her *** against a long sought breakthrough to emperor realm, she didn’t exactly lose it all..

            Of course, all that would depend on what direction the author want to give to this story !

          2. @alphaphoenix, [not sure why i can’t click reply to your comment, or maybe its just the way the blog is set]

            you’re right. The more I read about it, the more i’m convinced that Yun Che somehow obtained the ice art cultivation in a “carbon copy” mode, rather than a “steal move”.

            But I still think that its still not a ‘fair trade’ for Chu YueChan, because

            1) MC gains an entire skillset FOC carbon copy style (not stealing)
            2) MC gains a child (hopefully in the near future we’ll know what gender, abilities, name of this child
            3) MC gains forcefully a woman, imprinted (that’s how it normally rolls in Wuxia world? Women are often objects, attached to males, not an individual.

            as for Che YueChan

            1) she gains dragon body (which may or may not be incompatible with her ice arts), but she’s now Emperor level 2 (which 2 grades higher than her previous profound veins + gates, but were compatible with her ice-art cultivation)
            2) In her womb is now a child, and she now has two choices, if she keeps the child she probably has to abandon everything (because having a child is exactly opposite of what she’s been taught, etc), or abort the child, and still face risk that she may never be able to dabble in ice arts (but should be okay in other arts). But we all know that she’s very knowledgeable about many kinds of arts and cultivation.
            3) She is forced to admit that MC is now her man (which will bring more harm than good, unless MC goes all out and really takes good care of her like how a proper husband and wife should), and in this case irregardless of what happened, she cannot reveal that
            a) MC raped her
            b) they are unmarried
            c) she’s carrying their child.
            d) exposes that her body is a dragon imbued body.

            That is why despite the ‘gains’ that she had, it isn’t fair for her.

            And nobody knows (because the author doesn’t reveal) how many Profound Gates were opened with her new body. I wished it would be 54, but I doubt it. Assuming it isn’t 54, somehow MC still owes her “open up 5 profound gates” promise he made earlier LOL.

          3. @Charlie Spiritsong , the limited reply depth seems intentional, as too many reply of reply would squeeze it so much it’s unreadable.

            And it seems you’ve been reading ahead (no issue with that, I’ve read all the 506 available chapters so far) but let’s just be careful about not posting spoilers !

            About YueChan, no one says she got a ‘fair trade’, I just thought that saying “she gained truly nothing” wasn’t that accurate, she paid a heavy price and gained “something” in exchange, whether that was worth it, I won’t judge.

            Now, about your points :
            Yun Che got :
            1) Ice arts, yes, but he can’t truly use it till he can acquire the water seed, so for now, not that useful
            2) A child , we can’t confirm that without spoiling ;), although the “virgin dragon seed’ heavily suggested it (and sorry to disappoint but any gender, ability or name haven’t been revealed so far)
            3) He got to enjoy her, now whether that was enough to inprint her, can’t tell (and going by the xln case for example, not all rape means inprinting lol)
            If there really was inprinting, the care and protection he provided for several months may be more meaningful…

            As for YueChan
            1) She likely had a breakthrough (let’s not spoil more)
            2) Assuming she’s pregnant, she does have a tough choice to make, so let’s see how that plays out.
            But why would aborting the child cause her to not be able to use Ice arts ?
            3) She doesn’t have to reveal who her man is, apart from her, YunChe, Dragon and Jasmine, no one else knows. She seems capable enough to take care of her life without relying on a man.

            She probably has more to worry than the MC, but again, all that depends on how the author wants to develop it ;).

          4. @alphaphoenix: I haven’t been reading much, because i can’t read chinese (despite i’m a chinese myself, so i’ll need to take pointers from those who could read in the native chinese language), but i’ve asked a lot of questions in the spoiler forums with no answers (probably we can continue there, and i’m not exactly wanting to spoil things here, but i keep things discussed on the thread [e.g, this is 193, so i’ll only talk with items up to 193])

            1. YueChan may be pregnant, its heavily implied in the line ““Heh heh heh heh, you don’t need to think me. I simply wished to, for my own sake, find an ideal candidate for the transmission of my lineage. However…if you truly do feel gratitude for what you have gained, then can you agree to a request of mine?”. After all this dragon would have schemed, because the line alone, it would have meant the dragon would have behaved exactly like the Phoenix soul fragment, doing things as it was programmed to its best abilities, no more, no less (and Yun Che’s the ONLY person to graduate trial 1, trial 2, and trial 3 out of 128 potential candidates that never even passed trial 1). That’s why I’m pretty sure with the imagery given, she is implied to be pregnant (let alone the very graphic ‘treatment’ she got from Yun Che [i mean its hidden behind the idioms, proverbs and expressions]

            2) i stand corrected. I mean if she doesn’t abort her child, she wouldn’t be able to continue cultivating her ice arts, since in the earlier chapters, Asgardian Sect members must be chaste and all.

            3) i think let’s assume, assuming what is implied is true, everyone will notice her bulging stomach (unless you can remain slim and slender ?????) and so she will be forced to reveal the identity that a) she isn’t chase and b) who is that kid’s father. LOL. This assumption only holds true IF she’s pregnant (its implied, not confirmed) and if she is, just like you are, i’m VERY interested to know what the author has in store for her.

            If there is any way for me to contact you? I’ll be very happy to learn more pointers from you in terms of question and answers for this novel. (this blog doesn’t seem to allow me to contact you privately, as no means to identify your communication channels). If you’re willing, let’s suggest how we can contact each another.

            btw @alyschu (dunno if he/she can be summoned here like this), the line I quoted above has a mistake. It ought to be “you don’t need to thank me” instead of “think me”.

          5. I can reply to your on the wuxiaworld spoiler forum , any thead in particular?
            Or msg me (same Id) on the spcnet.tv forum (this website’s predecessor; ) )

        2. If this was a proper novel, not a Chinese cultivating web novel, author could really write some good dark, emotional material from this chapter. here’s to hoping. It’s been pretty good so far, though too much harem stuff

          I know majority of the guys in that world are dicks but dunno why so many of these girls fall for him so hard

          1. I’m thinking for some reason, I’m not sure why, but Chu YueChan is a little (i say, a little), inspired from that “woman from the tomb sect” in Condor Heroes by JinYong. There are some similarities in the character mould alright.

          2. Simple. Yun Che is manipulative. I’d believe he was the leader of a cult in his past life, if they added it to his backstory (they seem to embellish it as time goes on).

            With Qingyue, he made her conscious of the fact she was HIS wife, by refusing to call her anything but that. Used words to allow her to feel comfortable in the same bed as him. Furthermore, he made her eternally in his debt by opening her profound entrances and removing the harm from her body.

            With Cang Yue (wait a… they both have Yue!!), he flirted with her at every opportunity, then bribed the innkeepers into giving them single bed rooms, so that, she’d be comfortably sharing a bed with him. All to relax her guard, all to help her depend on him as an emotional crutch.

            With Yuechan (Seriously another Yue??), he showed off his medical talent and probably initially intended to slowly warm her frosty exterior through word games and favours, until she too fell. But, then Ancient Wingman Dragons appears. Two, wreck her cultivation and another gives him the Legendary DragonBalls. Thus, she becomes physically dependant on him, emotionally grateful and accepting of him and will forever remember his as the first (and Only) man to lay with her. And this won’t be the last time…we all know that.

            If it wasn’t for the fact that by all means Yun Che is a nice individual at heart, he’d make a great villain. As would many of the MC’s in xianxia.

            But most importantly, they all fall for him, because this is All The Girls!!

      3. No, i’m not gonna spoil anything, because this is chapter 193, so i’m only limiting to discussions / observations from chapters 1-193 (same goest to 194, 195, etc, up to that current chapter)

        However I do mean what I said, as I have stated that i’m dissecting the chapter / story up to the chapter.

  11. How come none of the “moral” readers were mad when he mass poisoned millions of people???? I’m not saying that his rape was justified but I find alot of the enraged readers to be hypocrites. Yun Che was the cause of mass slaughter of millions comparable to the Holocaust but God forbid he rape one person…

    1. That’s the way the world works, if he cures someone by making them suffer and cuts off part of their body not many would be mad since it was done to save the person, but some don’t consider this as saving, it all depends on the viewpoint, that’s why morally debatable things like these are a pain to comment on and bring many ideas with them that vary from being normal to it being an abomination so yeah we can at least say it fits with our MCs character.

  12. Putting aside the morally questionable ‘rape’, at least he didn’t give her his virgin seed of life for nothing, he got the cloud arts and some yin talent.

    Thanks for the chapter

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