Help With a Novel Description?

Hey guys, I thought I’d turn to you for help and save some time.  So a couple of people have mentioned that the current novel description for Coiling Dragon at https://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=118138 is suboptimal.  I’ve been meaning to write one forever, but I just haven’t had the time, since I’m so busy translating.  So I thought…why not try and see if you guys can help out?

Limit to 150 words and post’m in the comments.  Looking forward to seeing what you guys got!  If there’s an awesome one, I’ll use it for the mangaupdates/baka-tsuki as our ‘official’ novel description!

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119 thoughts on “Help With a Novel Description?” - NO SPOILERS

    1. Liney is a young boy living in a world where strength means everything. He is one of the last members of the 5000? year old dragonblood-clan. Liney aspires to become strong and rebuild his decaying clan. One day, the village he lives in gets visited by a powerful mage and a powerful swordsman. Their fight causes great harm to the village, and endanger Liney’s life. From that day onward his path to getting stronger might not be what he imagined.

  1. Isn’t it quite simple?

    Linley is a kid from the Baruch clan, a decaying family that was once at the top of all the warriors in the continent. The story unfolds as Linley discovers the secrets of his clan and finds a peculiar ring that contains the soul of an extremely powerful mage that lived 5000 years ago. Linley is determined to restore the glory of his clan and adventures the continent on a journey to increase his power through magic and martial arts training.

      1. I just typed what came to mind, making a synopsis isn’t that hard, I think mine is good enough as a template and some editing can make it good enough.

        I just don’t do it right now cause I’m watching the livestream John Carmack’s “Future of VR Panel” at GDC 2015 as of now.

        1. Ok, Carmack’s talk finished. I’ll give my input in a better synopsis.

          A youth of the decaying Baruch Clan of warriors finds a special ring containing the soul of an old mage that lived 5000 years ago. This Grandpa secretly instructs Linley in magic, while Linley also trains everyday in martial arts.

          In the world of Coiling Dragon, the Yulan Continent is one where being powerful is much more important than being rich, for even a king must bow to the most powerful warriors. Accompany Linley in his journey to reveal the secrets of the Baruch Clan and bring back it’s former glory.

          1. I think this gives too much of the story. Maybe hide the fact that the ring contains an old mage and his talent in magic. Instead just give hints of it.

            —-Part of the first one you did is good —-
            Linley is a kid from the Baruch clan, a decaying family that was once at the top of all the warriors in the continent. The story unfolds as Linley discovers the secrets of his clan and finds a peculiar ring…
            ——

            Maybe just add to this.

            When I first read this novel the part where he found out about the ring and Grandpa Doehring, his training in magic, and the secret of the dragonblood plus his encounter with Bebe is the best part. Knowing all this by reading the description kinda ruins it… Unfortunately I suck at writing in general. I’m only good at reading. 😛

    1. I’ve never been great at writing a synopsis, however I think neoroot has a good one written out. Therefore, let’s go with his. This part needs to be reworded slightly though cause it sounds awkward. “…his clan and adventures the continent on a journey…” Maybe say ‘explores the continent on a journey’?
      -The Nunchucku Turtle-

  2. a boy named linley learns he is one of the last people from a supreme warrior clan and finds one of his ancestors treasures the coiling dragon ring that contains a powerful magi that lived 5000 years ago now on a journey to learn to be the strongest magi there by learning magic and martial arts join him on his journey

  3. Boy meets girl. Girl cheats on boy. Karma hits girl like a truck. Boy meets better girl. Boy and girl live happily ever after. Other entertaining things related to martial arts happen.

    I dont know if you can get a better description than that.

    1. my votes on this one. totally. although instead of with just “..live happily ever after”, spice it up with some “..or will they?”. adds more suspense. 🙂 afterall, ‘tragedy’ tag suit this story too as it does have several angst and tears moment

  4. With a strong body, fierce willpower, and an affinity for both Earth and Wind magic, the future of six-year old Linley is looking bright indeed. Or it would, if he had inherited the dragonblood that once made his clan famous, and if his clan wasn’t now a mere shell of its former self. But when Linley finds a mysterious ring containing the spirit of a Grand Magus in a secret room of his father’s mansion, the future becomes his to shape. Together with his mystical beast companion Bebe, follow Linley as he takes the Yulan World by storm!

    1. This is definitely my favorite Synopsis so far. Well written and an attention grabber. Make me want to start reading Coiling Dragon again from the beginning.

  5. Linley is one of the last ancestors of amazing dragonblood warriors. They, which once stood at the pinnacle of power in the continent, are now a dying breed. The story follows Linley as he struggles to improve so he can restore his clan’s old glory with the help of one mystical ring. Will he succeed?

  6. Descended from a legendary but decayed clan of Dragonblood warriors, Linley is shouldered with his father’s expectations. Eager eyed and resolute, he steps into a ruthless world. A world of powerful beasts and immortals!

    1. This one is a little more fancy and has more spoilers. 🙂

      The long, lost spirit of a Saint level immortal. A mysterious, unfathomable ring. As fate would have it, they were to be the catalyst for a young boy’s journey to restore his clan’s glory.

      Linley is a descendant of the ancient Baruch clan. In his veins flow the blood of Supreme Warriors. In his destiny lies tragedy, vengeance, love . . . His name will transcend planes, and his power will stir the heavens and shake the world!

  7. Born into the Kingdom of Fenlai , in the town Wushan , the boy Linely was living a peaceful and tranquil life. Yet probelms occured and fate had other plans for the young boy , his clan slowly decaying , his father cold yet mysterious and his mother unknown to him. However , Linley had a goal , to become strong , so strong that nothing under heaven could be deemed as a threat. Unfortunately , Linely did not possess overwhelming talent. In a world where power were was everything , Linley could only be described as above average yet destiny was not for certain and the child possessed supernatural luck which allowed him to find a certain ring , this ring changed the child’s destiny forever.

  8. Dear reader, you want to know what Coiling Dragon is about? Then know that it’s not possible to describe how great this story is with few simple words. Are you a fan of fantasy type novels of Xanxia? If so, this one is a must read! Just go there and start reading, i promise that you will not regret it one bit!… Well, maybe you will, because of severe lack of sleep resulting from addiction to Coiling Dragon and reading marathon that you will do! Ha, Ha, Ha! C’mon, read of regret! Your choice!

  9. Little Bebe was abandoned in the ruins of a mansion belonging to an old, decayed clan – but he is not just some ordinary mouse – he is a powerful magical beast of unknown origins! Watch him tame a human boy and carefully groom him into a being almost as awesome as Bebe himself.

    1. bebe really should be the MC – mysterious lineage, OP strengh and speed, perverted, doesn’t have to train coughing blood to reach the peak, arrogant by nature, basically a perfect MC, what more could anyone want? 😀

  10. Linley is the eldest son in the Baruch clan, a dying clan that was once known for their Dragonblood Warriors in the continent of Yulan. Determined to restore his clan to all its glory, Linley will train in the ways of martial arts and magic as he uncovers an anicent ring containing the soul of a powerful magi. Will this magi help him obtain the power which he seeks? Or will his clan be forever doom? Facing many hardships and challenges, see his story unfolds as he journey through this vast world.

  11. A young genius from once glorious, ancient line sets out on a journey to, well, become an ass-kicking warior mage. His path is twisted though and at the end, he may become a dragon or a fairy for that matter. An ass-kicking fairy. His adventure begins when he finds a black ring housing an ancient master with a kink for teaching: and boy, he sure can teach. There may be some weather magic involved, as well as legendary-to-be swords. A great fantasy with just right amount of romance carefully hidden (sensei!?). Not that kind of romance though. Every second chapter is a cliffhanger and the atmosphere is quite serious and contrasting with this review – there will be dragons.
    As for the fairy, see for yourself if it’s just a joke or the terryfying truth about dragon warriors… It’s well worth it.

  12. Let’s have a go at this:

    Linley Baruch, a small child with unshakable determination and dreams to be strong, to protect his family, to revive his fallen Clan but to be strong, one must need power!

    Watch his journey to be strong to surpass his limits…-or will he fail trying?

  13. Lienly Baruch a 6 year old kid coming from the noble lineage of the Dragonblood warriors.His clan was once creator of legends now it is in its doomest days.On a certain days lienly find a ring.His dream was to take his clan out of its doomest days and this ring that looks normal might be his ticket for that.

  14. Linley is one of the few descendant of the Dragoblood warriors left after many centuries of fame. He wants nothing more than to bring his clan back to greatness so he trains tirelessly every day, until his village is caught in a fight between a saint level mage and warrior. Prepared to sacrifice his life for his brothers he somehow survives however his blood spills onto an ancient ring he found. This ring contains the soul of a long dead saint level mage. This starts Linley’s journey to become the number one genius that has ever lived, even if he must face many hardships along the way.

  15. *Ahem* Coiling Dragon is about a magical man with magical talents living in a magical world with his magical beasts doing magical things and defending justice, magically of course, and defeating magical villains.

  16. Linley’s one of the last members of the dying Baruch Clan, a clan who once boasted as one of the four Ultimate Warriors. Linley lacks the ability of his clan, but soon he will learn he holds another kind of power, under the tutelage of an ancient spirit stored in the mysterious Coiling Dragon ring and accompanied of the magical Beast Bebe, he will restore the might of his clan in the continent of Yulan.

  17. An ancient mage, who’s full power remains to be seen, trapped in a ring.
    A mysterious black mouse, all mysterious and black, Bebe.
    A young boy, who seeks the power of warrior, becames tempted by magic.
    Will they survive the journey towards the very summit of the world?
    Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition… Not even the dragons.
    Can anybody stop the church before it’s too late?
    Will the mighty blood of dragons prevail over time and… Does karma exist?
    On the big screens whenever they improve the special effects to an adequate level. See it in the cinemas whenever I manage to buy the copy rights.
    This boy will make the angels fall

  18. Power is absolute in the Yulan Continent. Those with power can soar the heavens, unbound by mortal laws and respected by even kings and emperors.

    At the peak of power were the Dragonblood warriors, who roamed the continent wielding their swords, held in awe by others while striking terror to their enemies. Tales of their might spread like wildfire in the heat of summer. Such were the glorious days of the Baruch clan.

    Five millennia later, the Baruch clan has reduced to only Linley and his father. Linley is tasked with restoring Baruch clan’s glory by his father. Yet, not a single Dragonblood warrior has emerged over the course of several centuries, and Linley is no exception. Disheartened by the lack of Dragonblood density in his veins, Linley accidentally stumbles upon an ancient ring harbouring a great power. Thus, Linley’s struggles of life and death for his clan begins.

  19. I can’t write a good description. But I can point out a few things that need to be highlighted in it. First, Linley is the heir to an ancient clan that has fallen on extremely hard times and he wishes to restore the lost glory. Second, in the Yulan Continent, personal power counts for a lot more than worldly power and wealth. Third, Linley gains precious friends and companions but also deadly enemies. Fourth, Linley is someone who will (or has the potential to) take the entire continent by storm.

    I believe those points are needed to make prospective readers interested in reading about Linley’s journey, expecting not to be disappointed. There are also some things that must not be revealed before one has even begun reading. For example, I believe Grandpa Doehring and Bebe need not be mentioned, as it reveals too much. Likewise, the Coiling Dragon ring, the Radiant Church, Dragonblood Warrior lineage, etc.

    The problem with the descriptions available for many of the popular manga and novels is that you hardly get an idea of the true scope of the entire story. You can check if you want. I feel it is important to give a synopsis that covers the entire story with minimum spoiler content. Merely shedding some light on the first volume won’t let people know how great the story really is. So, “non-specific + encompassing” is my suggestion.

  20. Linley, a young noble from a once powerful clan stumbles upon an ancient artifact, a coiling dragon in the shape of a ring. Upon being injured, Linley accidentally activates the ring, pulling him into a world of conflict. Accompany Linley as he sets out to discover the secrets of his clan, forging through countless hardships, overcoming various obstacles, and against insurmountable odds, paves a path to restore his once powerful clan to its former glory.

    OR

    Linley, a young noble from a decaying ancient clan stumbles upon an mysterious artifact, a coiling dragon in the shape of a ring. Upon being injured, Linley accidentally activates the ring, pulling him into a world of conflict. Setting out to discover the secrets of his clan, Linley forges through countless hardships, overcoming various obstacles, and against insurmountable odds, paves a path to restore his once powerful clan to its former glory.

  21. On the Yulan Continent, strength means everything. The world is governed not by laws, but by the power struggles between various godly combatants. Warriors, Magi and Magical Beasts are worshipped and feared by the masses.

    Linley Baruch, a child in the Wushan Township, is an ant to these combatants. His clan has fallen into obscurity. With his childlike innocence, he dreams of one day becoming a strong warrior and making his father proud!

    This is a mysterious world full of wonder, and yet Linley’s hometown is wholly unremarkable . Young boys are training in the yard, villagers are farming in the fields — all is peaceful.

    The peace, however, is just the calm before the storm. This world’s nature is tumultuous and violent, filled with bloodshed!

    Peace can only be kept with power!

    Linley, tasked with cleaning his clan’s deprecated ancestral hall, stumbles upon a wooden ring…

    The winds of fate are stirring.

    This is what I came up with! 151 words, I can’t figure out how to make it shorter! 囧囧囧

    1. I think I can change “The peace, however, is just the calm before the storm.”

      to

      “The peace, however, cannot last forever.”

      I’l add a few more words now.

      Final draft:

      On the Yulan Continent, strength means everything. The world is governed not by laws, but by the power struggles between various godly combatants. Warriors, Magi and Magical Beasts are worshipped and feared by the masses.

      Linley Baruch, a child in the Wushan Township, is just an ant to these combatants. His clan has fallen into obscurity. With his childlike innocence, he dreams of one day becoming a strong warrior and making his father proud!

      This is a mysterious world full of wonder, and yet Linley’s hometown is wholly unremarkable . Young boys are training in the yard, villagers are farming in the fields — all is peaceful.

      The peace, however, cannot last forever. This world’s nature is tumultuous and violent, filled with bloodshed!

      Peace can only be kept with power!

      Linley, tasked with cleaning his clan’s deprecated ancestral hall, stumbles upon an ancient wooden ring…

      The winds of fate begin to stir.

        1. Yes! The last sentence seems to flow a bit wonkily I think it is because “stir” sounds dissonant with “ring..”. “Turn” fits in a bit better.

          1. Also I think I want to change “This is a mysterious world full of wonder” to “This is a mysterious land full of wonder” because I use the word “world” 3 times and that is too much.

            So much for final draft.

          2. I also would like to comment that my focus for the synopsis was:

            – Not spoiling plot in any way, only spoiling a bit of the setting, which doesn’t really give the bad effects that a spoiler does.

            I didn’t want to spoil bebe, doehring, or even that Linley was a dragonblood warrior. That takes the sense of discovery out of the first chapters.

            I especially didn’t want to spoil that Linley becomes godlike in power himself. Most of the descriptions here do that, and even if it is unsurprising, it ruins some enjoyment for me. This is a “weak to strong” genre, at first it must be emphasized that the MC is very weak.

            – Never mentioning the story in 3rd person. Ie: “This story” etc. We aren’t reading a tale from a book, we are seeing things unfold from Linley’s eyes!

  22. Eh, let me throw this one.

    In the Yulan Continent, many clan have risen and fallen. They stood weak against the test of time.

    However, everything comes with an excemption. Baruch Clan. They had survived the passage of five thousand years, but not without the marks that left their clan bare. The Clan is dying, their wealth and fame decaying, their numbers dwindling.

    Their end is only enclosing. Or is it?

    Not without ‘him’ shaking the world, for the Baruchs are not a fallen name.

  23. In a legendary but decaying clan on the Yulan Continent, there lives a young boy named Linley. With the discovery of a power in a mysterious object he found in the ruins of his ancestral home and with his families wish for him to restore the once glorious clan upon discovering his hidden potential, Linley sets out on a unexpected journey that will forever change the him and the very face of the world.

    – and cut.

    1. Edit since I didn’t notice a mistake and adding, lol.

      In the Yulan continent, power means everything. Powerful warriors and magi rule those below them and violence is a common occurrence. In a legendary but severely decaying clan lives a young boy named Linley Baruch. With the discovery of a being and power inside a mysterious object he found in the ruins of his ancestral home and with his families wish for him to restore the once glorious clan upon discovering his hidden potential, Linley sets out on a unexpected journey that will forever change him and the very face of the world.

  24. Empires rise and fall on the Yulan Continent. Saints, immortal beings of unimaginable power, battle using magic and strength, leaving swathes of destruction in their wake. Magical beasts rule the forests, where the brave- or the foolish- go to test their might. The strong live like kings, while the weak strive for survival.

    In the small town of Wushan, one young boy finds himself with a burden far beyond his years. The scion of the once-renowned Dragonblood Warriors, whose name once caused the Heaven itself to tremble, has found his family legacy comes with an incident of deep shame: the loss of its family heirloom. Tasked with reclaiming the pride of the clan, our young hero goes through trials and tribulations to grow stronger, making companions and enemies on the way.

    Who knows? There might be a new legend in the making…

    1. Decided to edit my own version. Mostly rewording text, with an emphasis on not spoilering too much besides what gets revealed within first handful of chapters. Feel free to make any changes that you guys think would work better.

      Empires rise and fall on the Yulan Continent. Saints, immortal beings of unimaginable power, battle using spells and swords, leaving swathes of destruction in their wake. Magical beasts rule the forests, where the brave- or the foolish- go to test their strength. Even the mighty can fall, feasted on by those stronger. The strong live like royalty; the weak strive to survive another day.

      In the small town of Wushan, one young boy finds himself with a burden far beyond his years. The scion of the once-renowned Dragonblood Warriors, whose name once caused Heaven itself to tremble, has found his family legacy comes with an incident of deep shame: the loss of its family heirloom. Tasked with reclaiming the pride of the clan, our young hero goes through trials and tribulations in his quest for strength, making friends as well as enemies.

      Only one thing is certain. Legends are not born. They are forged by iron will, tempered with strength, and tested by adversity.

    2. I like this one. I think you can revise it a bit though:

      “The scion of the once-renowned Dragonblood Warriors, whose name once caused the Heaven itself to tremble”

      may sound better if you remove a “once” as it is a bit redundant.

      You may also want to add something about the ring itself, as people will wonder how the title ties into the story.

      1. Good point about having “once” in there twice. I guess I would get rid of the first one, since the Dragonblood Warriors are still well known in legend.

        Regarding leaving the ring out, I chose not to borrow too much from the plot outside of the first 3 chapters (and some general background about the continent like Saints). The title of the book seems to reference the ring, but thus far in the story the importance of the ring itself has been up and down. I consider it about as important as Bebe and the Bloodviolet Sword, it just happened to be encountered earlier.

  25. This is the story all ’bout how, Linley’s life got flipped, turned upside down. I’d like to take a minute, just sit right there, I’ll tell you the story how he mastered the powers of earth and air.

    In tiny Wushan, born and raised, training is how he spent most of his days, no relaxing, Linley was all cool, trying to restore his tribe to its rule, when a couple of saints, who were up to no good, started making trouble in his neighbourhood. There was one big fight, but Linley wasn’t scared, he wanted to be the best mage of his era’s.

  26. A descendant of the Baruch clan, once known as one of the four supreme warriors of the Yulan continent, our hero Linley is given an impossible task of retrieving the original weapon of his ancesto, the war blade Slaughterer to restore the clan’s former glory.

    Having reached a physical limit of training at the age of 12, he finds out he cannot train battle ki through traditional methods due to his special bloodline.
    His only hope is to become a magician, achieved by only one in ten thousand people!

    All seems hopeless until he accidentally stumbles upon a mysterious ring with the symbol of a dragon..

  27. Linley Live in little town of Wushan located within the Kingdom of Fenlai as decendant one of four supreme legendary warrior dragonblood warrior, training from young age to make proud of his father and bring back glory to his decaying clan with history more than 5000 years, Baruch Clan. While growing up he found out his blood not sufficient to become dragonblood warrior , that make him to more obsessed with his training.

    One day in little town of Wushan Occur tragedy that will never he forget, fight beetween a Magus vs 4 warrior with magical beast companian and not long after this tragedy follow up with 2 saint each from magus vs warrior that almost claim his little brother life, Warthon and himself. After witnessed how powerfull magus and help from Spirit Soul Saint Magus Doehring Cowart that came from a misterious ring he found in ancestral hall Clan he began training to became a magus.

    One day his father tell him about ancient heirlom that has been missing and hope his son can reclaim it back to bring back glory of Baruch Clan, with help from spirit soul Saint Magus and Bebe a company magical beast he’s befriend with , can he reclaim ancient heirloom from his Clan ? thus became the firts mission from the man in the road of Immortal.

  28. Meet linley, a descendant of the famed dragonblood warriors, except his dragonblood is weak, so he decides to become a magus with the company of his trusty grandpa in a ring and good friend bebe the rat. Making new friends with philandering kids he decides are his brothers. Except then he finds some dragonblood, so he becomes a dragonblood warrior. Then it’s off on a quest for revenge to kill the kings brother for the kidnapping of linley’s mother and death of his father. Except it was really the king behind the whole thing, so he slaughters his way through a hundred innocent soldiers to get the king, but oops it was really the pope. He narrowly dodges danger by accidentally causing the deaths of a few hundred million people because he found a pretty purple sword. Oh yeah, some bitch broke his heart, then got married to this jerk, who got stepped on and killed by a giant ape on their wedding day. What will the future hold for our new hero? romance? cool panther sidekick? More avoidable conflict he decides to get into anyway? Well, it’s sure to be fun regardless. Read Coiling dragon.

  29. In a world full of powerful warriors, mysterious magi, and terrible magical beasts, the Dragonblood Warriors reign supreme! Or at least they used to. Now the majestic bloodline has dwindled to the minor noble Baruch clan. Linley, the next heir, wants to bring his clan back to its former glory! A potent, enigmatic ring embroidered with a coiling dragon could provide him the power he needs to accomplish his goals. Join him on his quest for martial strength, honor, and to discover the many secrets of the Yulan continent!

  30. A story about a boy who not only has big dreams, but is willing to put in the time and effort to achieve them. The story follows Linley Baruch on his path of enlightenment, through happiness and strife. Linley starts off as a young boy who is a young child of a declined noble family, with aspiration to restore his family name. Little did Linley know that upon finding an unremarkable ring that his destiny would be forever changed. Fighting battles and wars with both magic and martial arts, Linley will impact the world and shake the heavens above as he manifests his destiny.

  31. “Yulan calender 4579, the first Dragonblood Warrior, Baruch slew a Nine-Headed Serpent Emperor and founded the Baruch Clan as one of the legendary Four Supreme Warrior -Clans.”
    “Yulan calender 4690, the second Dragonblood Warrior, Ryan Baruch defeated and subdued a Saint-level Golden Dragon, and became known as the Golden Dragonrider Saint.”
    “Yulan calender 5360, the third Dragonblood Warrior, Hazard Baruch defeated a Saint-level Bloody-eyed Maned Lion and became famous throughout the world…”

    … but after five millennia the Brauch Clan decayed and the fame and honour of the once renowned mighty Dragonblood Warriors was lost. And now…the history of the Yulan continent shall change anew…

    “Yulan calender 9984 Linley Baruch was born…”

      1. Well, I actually already registered since a looong while ago but after countless attempts for my ambition to become “first” on my “first comment”, I gave up now Q.Q

        p.s. Would it be possible to make a overview of all the submissions (without the trolls) on a new side (to see what’s availabe) and possible add a poll?

        1. Haha, better later than never!

          Polling is…kind of difficult here, the plugin I haven’t doesn’t work. I’ll look into it, but I’ll probably make an executive decision later.

    1. I thought it would be a good idea to list the former achievements of the Baruch clan because it doesn’t spoiler too much, lets much open and is mentioned quite early at the begining B01C03 and now in B10C29, especially because it rounds things good up with the achievements of Linley.

      Edit: the beginning with “…the first Dragonblood Warrior, Baruch…” should probably be replaced with “…the very first Dragonblood Warrior of the YULAN CONTINENT, Baruch…” because the Dragonblood Warriors probably descended from a higher realm, which is not directly mentioned yet(?).

  32. Yulan continent. The place where strong warrior and powerful magus dominates the world. Where power means everything. Our protagonist Linley, a six year old boy is a member of the now decaying brawch clan whose fame once shook the entire continent. But when Linley finds a mysterious ring containing the spirit of a Grand Magus in a secret room of his father’s manor and learns the secret of his clan, the future starts to unfold before him. Follow Linley as he embarks on a journey to restore the glory of his clan and become a powerful GRAND MAGUS as well as one of the four legendary supreme warrior of the continent, THE DRAGONBLOOD WARRIOR.

  33. A Boy, born in the peaceful town
    “So bi, bi, big! Is, is this a legendary magical beast?”
    …In the world of swords and magic and beast…
    “He truly is talented!”
    …Born with unlimited potential…
    “I am a Saint-level Grand Magus of the Pouant Empire!”
    …The mysterious expert alongside him…
    “Wushan town. Looks like I didn’t get lost.”
    …The disaster that comes to them…
    “Even if I die, I will not forgive you!”
    …The long, lasting grudge….
    “Linley, he’s too dangerous!”
    …The one behind it all…
    “The moon’s reflection in the water, the flower in the mirror, the man in a dream. In the end, all of it is illusionary, is reduced to nothingness.”
    …and betrayal of the closed ones…

    Written by ’I Eat Tomatoes’ (我吃西红柿), one of the most populer Chinese webnovel writer of xianxia novel. One of his works is Stellar Transformation, which has been made into Hot MMORPG in China.

    ———————-
    Good Luck Ren

  34. this is a story where famous anime(pokemon, bleach, fairy tail…), religion and philosophy intertwine…
    once you read this, you know that shit just happened in an absolutely awesome way and can’t stop readin’ it…
    this is a warning to you all, do not read this… you can never go back to the way you were before….

    p.s. do not try to read it’s manhua counterpart if you haven’t read the whole story…you will feel like shit just happened in a bad way…

  35. Within the world of Coiling Dragon exist fantastical warriors, superb magi, and magical beasts.

    Between planes of existence walk powers that warp reality using their knowledge of elemental law.

    In a minor world of this vast universe, fraught with conflict between powers both great and small, strength is everything.

    A young boy will discover a treasure hidden by unknown origins, beginning his journey through space and time. By his side, a companion bonded through soul, they will walk paths both magical and mundane.

    Enter a story that will enrapture your soul, about a boy on the path to unraveling the secrets of both his world, and all others, to gain the power he desires.

  36. Hi everyone, its my first post here 🙂

    Linley Baruch’s only wish since his childhood is to reclaim the former glory of his fallen clan. He could not be happier when his father told him one day that their clan hails from the lineage of the Dragon blood warriors, the strongest combatants of legends! However, he falls into despair as he does meet the eligibility to become a Dragon blood warrior himself. After finding an old ring in his ancestral home, a new path opened before Linley. What power does the mysterious ring possess? What does fate has in store for him? Follow a young man embarking on a journey to create his own legend.
    A story of magic and forbidden techniques, drama, love, betrayal, and the most bad-ass mouse since King Mickey of Kingdom Hearts!

    You can cut the last part lol, that is just for fun ^^

  37. I think it’s hard for readers to give a good synopsis because they are missing a large chunk of story from the remaining 10 books. I’ve read the series, and I can say that you have a slightly different perspective near the end of the book. I’m just saying this because people are focusing on some of the earlier driving points in the first few books, but the details of the plot points seem to be ever changing in the book.

    P.S. Can’t wait till we hit the crystal caves arc!

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