GOR Chapter 174

Chapter 174

1st chapter of the week is up!

A little notice, there’ll be only 5 chapters this week. 2nd on Wed, 3rd, 4th and 5th between Fri and Sat. Planning to spend some time editing some earlier chapters and rest abit… =P

Also, here is a revised intro. Please comment on what you think about it.


After an unexpected incident, Chen Xiaolian, an ordinary high school student came to discover that the world he lives in is nothing more than a program. That he and those around him exists as NPCs, whose meaning of existence is to be used as entertainment for others. That every decision he ever made was simply the effect caused by a predetermined script. Most importantly, that this world is slowly heading toward its end.

Now, Chen Xiaolian must adapt, gather allies to fight and survive, and uncover the truth of this world.

9 thoughts on “GOR Chapter 174” - NO SPOILERS

  1. The intro is good overall, but needs some grammar work.

    “an ordinary high school student, came to discover”
    “he and those around him exist as NPCs,”
    “whose existence is meant to be used as entertainment”
    “That every decision he’s ever made”
    “the effect of a predetermined script.”
    “And most importantly, that this world is slowly heading toward its end.”

    1. Also, upon re-reading, that one bit has “exist” and “existence” sandwiched in too close together. Maybe, “That he and those around him are only NPCs, whose struggles are used as entertainment for others.”?

      1. Thx so much for the feedback!
        About the ‘exist’ part, how about:
        That he and those around him exist as NPCs, serving only as a source of entertainment for others.

  2. I feel like the description is a bit spoilery… A lot of the stuff disclosed in the description is not found out in the book until we meet the GM which is a fair way in.

    1. To be fair, that what a lot of us suggested when the intro revision came about a few weeks ago.
      The spoiler part is what needed since it what most of the readers started reading in the first place.

  3. Much better then before.
    Though, the last sentence feel unnessary.

    “Now, Chen Xiaolian must adapt, gather allies to fight and survive, and uncover the truth of this world.”

    It the generic explore the world thing, when the main theme is simply surviving.

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